学生风采展示板

学生风采展示板

Saving the Earth

As time goes by, humans are making the Earth sick. People cut down too many trees and leave more and more rubbish here and there. Factories let out their waste without doing anything to it. All of these have caused many serious problems. More and more good land has turned into deserts. Rivers and lakes have been polluted and the water in them becomes dirty and poisonous. What’s more, the air is less clean, even the temperature on the Earth is higher than before. The Earth is sick now. What should we do to save her?

First, we should stop people from pouring waste directly into the air or rivers.

Second, planting more trees and grass is a good idea. It can stop the wind from blowing the earth[土壤]away. Besides, forests can make the air clean and fresh.

From now on, we should do something useful to protect the Earth. It is our home and saving the Earth is our duty.

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学 九年（1）班 孟琦

陈传光老师点评：

本文的小作者以“拯救地球”为话题，从破坏植被引起土地沙化、倾倒垃圾导致环境污染等方面阐述了人类对地球的伤害，说明了保护地球、保护环境的重要性，以及人们该如何采取行动。本文行文流畅、通俗易懂，是一篇不错的习作。

My Hometown in 2030

My name is Feng Kaiqiang. I’m a middle school student. I live in Gan Yu.What will my hometown be like in 2030? I think my hometown will be more beautiful than now.

In 2030, my hometown will have more tall buildings. There will be fewer cars and buses. We will take subways more. The environment will be better and there will be more trees and parks. What’s more, I think my hometown will be cleaner and there will be less pollution. The streets will be clean and everyone will be happy. Kids won’t go to school anymore, because they will study at home with computers.

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学 九年（1）班 丰凯强

陈传光老师点评：

本文中，小作者用简短的语言表达了自己对家乡美好未来的憧憬。文章恰当运用了所学的语法知识，尤其是较好地运用了一般将来时态和“there be”句型的将来时态，做到了学以致用，是一篇值得学习的习作。

My First Flight

Last summer, I went to visit my grandparents by air. I was too excited to fall asleep the night before, because I had never taken a plane before! On the day of the flight, my parents and I went to the airport early. After we checked in, a stewardess took me to the seat in the plane. Half an hour later, the plane took off and I was soon in the air. Luckily, my seat was near the window, so I could enjoy the splendid[极佳的]view outside! But before long, I was so tired that I couldn’t help sleeping! When I woke up, the plane had just landed. It was a pleasant trip, only the time had been too short!

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学 九年（2）班 张恒

陈传光老师点评：

本文是一篇记叙文，按时间顺序讲述了小作者第一次乘坐飞机的经历。文章交代了时间、地点，以及在飞机上所发生的事情。全文文字流畅、用词得当，是一篇不错的学生习作。

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