话题作文指导分析

杨庆春

[话题作文]

亲爱的同学们，请你们以“My English Study”為题，谈一下两年来学习英语的心得体会。要点包括：你们在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟。

要求：

1. 语言流畅，表达准确，内容充实，可适当发挥;

2. 词数不少于90词。

[词汇储备]

★单词

fail， master， carefully， difficulty， memory， realize， especially， something， language

★短语

listen to， keep on， give up， as much as possible， step by step， make great progress， the more...the more... ，

take note， pay attention to， take part in， be confident， be afraid of.

[句型荟萃]

★开头句

1. Let me tell you something about it.

2. Since I have been in my middle school， I have learnt a lot in many ways especially in English.

3. English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well？

★主题句

1. The more carefully you listen， the more useful information you can get.

2. In order to learn English well， we are supposed to take part in all kinds of activities.

3. It is very important for us to be confident.

4. In English class， we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary.

5. When I entered the middle school， I had so many difficulties with my English.

★结尾句

1. In a word， only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

2. Without them， there will be no my success. Thank you！

3.Only in this way， can we improve our English.

4. I believe as long as we remember all these ways， we will surely make great progress in English in the end.

[思路导航]

本文是一篇命题式记叙文。文章要求以“My English Study”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈我们在英语学习中遇到的困难、解决的方法以及感悟。

此话题属于语言学习范畴，学生有多年的英语学习经历，有许多亲身经历的素材可写，所以本文十分贴近学生生活实际。

就本文写作而言，首先要研读所给提示信息，了解写作要求，掌握提示要点，筛选写作素材。其次，要谋篇布局，合理安排文章段落，尤其是开头和结尾段。最后要总结全文，做到首尾呼应，并作点评表达自己的感悟和提出合理建议。总之，在写作时，同学们要重点描述自己的学习经历，并作适当发挥。同时注意文章说理要清楚，语言表达要流畅，句式运用要多样，文章用词要准确。

人称应以第一人称为主。在讲述自己过去学习经历时需要用一般过去时态。

[参考范文]

My English Study

Since I have been in my middle school， I have learnt a lot in many ways especially in English. Now， let me tell you something.

When I entered my middle school， I was not very familiar with English because it was a foreign language. I didn’t have the courage to study it well. During my first year at school， my grade dropped so much that I was very concerned.

I didn’t know how to deal with it. However， my teachers helped me a lot. They chatted with me and encouraged me. It makes me realize that it’s easy to do anything if you want. After that， I started to work hard in order not to disappoint my teachers and parents.

At last， I succeed in learning English and achieved high grades in my English examination. I am really grateful to my teachers who have given me great help. Without them， there will be no my success. Thank you！