My Summer Vacation Plan
2021-08-31陈传光
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陈传光男，江苏省连云港市罗阳中学高级教师、连云港市优秀教育园丁、江苏省教育学会会员，从事教育工作15年：曾获英语专业技能大赛市一等奖、班主任基本功大赛市一等奖：有多篇论文在各主流和核心期刊上发表：曾指导学生在各类竞赛中取得不错的成绩，有多人获得省级奖和地市级奖。
My Summer Vacation Plan
Summer vacation is coming. I have made some plans for it.
During the vacation， I will make sure that the diet is regular and suitable. And I willkeep exercising for about half an hour every day. I think it will be good for my healthy①，Besides， I want to preview what we are going to learn. It can make me feel relaxed when Ilearn new knowledge. After finsh② studying， I will also go intcrcsting somewhere③. I thinkvisiting some places of interest can increase our knowledge.
What do you think of my summer vacation plan？
江苏省连云港市罗阳中学九年级
丁浩宸
1.优点：
该篇习作中小作者介绍了自己的暑假计划，从健康饮食与运动，预习新课和参观名胜三个方面具体介绍了暑假安排。全文层次清晰，用词准确，语句通顺，关联词及复合句、祈使句的使用体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
2.需要修改的地方：
①healthy改为health。my是形容性物主代词，后接名词 health。
②finish改为finishing。After是介词，后接动词“ing”形式。
③interesting someWhere改为somewhere interesting。形容词修饰不定副词，放在不定副词后。词后。
3.评分：
按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分25分的评分标准，本文修改前可得22分。
