About My Life

昝金玉

As we all know， the most important thing in the life is our attitude towards it， tons of men have tried different ways of treating life. I'm a middle school student， I have my own idea about the life. I face my life with a positive attitude. I usually get up at 5：30 every day， start my study and life of a day. I'm also worried about my grades， but the life should be full of happiness. I should study hard now， save the happiness for the future. I'm going to have a very important exam in May next year， which will be a turning point in my life. My parents always complain that I am so lazy， but I just like to live in my own way. I will do my best for my future. In the face of life， I should keep positive and optimistic attitude . I hope I can get a good grades in the exam to reward my life.

简评：

该生的作文，语言通顺，能用积极的态度来阐述自己对生活的看法并且为之付出努力。在作文中，该生不仅用了一般现在时、将来时，而且还能用宾语从句、非限制性定语从句来表达自己的思想，是一篇不错的学生作文。

指导教师：杨 萍