My Best Friend and I

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My best friend is Tom. Let me tell you something about us.

Im more outgoing than Tom， so I like playing football. He likes reading books. He is taller than me， because he has good eating habits.

We are both in the same school. He is in Class 1 Grade 2. Im in Class 2 Grade 2. He is more handsome than me， but Im smarter than Tom. He reads many books. His favorite book is“The old man and the sea.” He thinks its very good. I like singing. My favorite song is Demons. We both like making friends with teachers. I think friends are like a mirror.

简评：

本文是初二学生的一篇习作。主要记述了“我”和好朋友的异同点，重点是使用比较级的语句。本文小作者对比较级的运用较为准确。文章内容的组织略有欠缺，还须进一步加强。

指导教师：王磊