A Happy Trip

郭佳鑫

Last summer， I went to Beijing on vacation with my family. The weather was sunny and hot. I saw some flowers along the way. They were beautiful. So we were very happy and excited. The air was very clean. We ate Beijing Roast Duck and Kung Pao Chicken. They were delicious. And we visited the Palace Museum and Tiananmen Square. They were beautiful，too. I liked the Palace Museum very much. Because there were a lot of people there. There were many old literature books and the clothes which the ancient emperors wore at that time. I knew the ancient culture and hardship. I learned a lot of knowledge. I was very happy. I had a great trip.

简评：

这是一篇叙事的文章，语言流畅，思路清晰，通过所闻所感的真实描述，表现了小作者热爱生活，热爱祖国的高尚情操。语法运用正确，但是主次不够分明。

指导教师： 管德琴