仅用17个句式玩转广东高考任务写作
2014-10-10何家锻
何家锻
高考要求在有限的时间内迅速利用平时所掌握的句式进行迅速有效地输出,因此,有效句式的背诵显得非常重要。坚持背诵和训练常用句式,并在任务写作时运用这些句式,不但可以加快写作速度,而且还可以减少中英思维混乱等。笔者精选以下17个常用句式,用来攻克历年广东高考任务写作真题,以求应用于其它的任务写作。
1. I couldnt forget the time when I did sth., meeting with great difficulties. 我不能忘记有一段时间做了某事,碰到很多困难。(用你的经历说明某一观点时用)
2. I cant agree more with the author that we should stick to doing sth. 我非常同意作者所说我们应该坚持做某事。(表示赞同作者观点)
3. Whether we should do sth. or not has caused a heated debate among students. 我们是否做某事引起激烈讨论/关注/争辩。(引出话题或主题)
4. There are at least three good reasons accounting for my view. 至少有3点理由支持我的观点。(引出理由)
5. The reason why I choose to do sth. is that it is of great importance for sb. to do sth. 我选择做某事的原因是对某人做某事很重要。(解释原因)
6. With (sb doing) sth., sb. will be able to do sth.有某人做某事,某人能做好某事。(原因)
7. There is no doubt that we will definitely find a better way to do sth. 毫无疑问,我们肯定会找到更好的方法来解决问题。
8. It is of great importance for sb to do sth. 做某事很重要。
9. Only if we face stress with an optimistic mind, can we release stress.只有积极面对压力,才能解压。
10. It was sth. that convinced me that I should manage to solve the problem.是某事让我确信我应该努力解决问题。
11. Not only should we do sth., but also we should do sth. 我们不仅做某事,而且应该做某事。
12. Thus /therefore /consequently, we should meet the challenge and cope with the situation.因此,我们应该面对挑战,应对情形。
13. There are a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.有一系列有效措施应对这种情形。
14. It goes without saying that we should take measures to solve the problem.毫无疑问,我们应该采取措施解决问题。
15. From what I have said above, its not difficult to draw a conclusion that we should do sth. (instead of doing sth.)(and avoid doing sth.)(without doing sth.) 综上所述,不难得出结论我们应该做某事而不做某事。
16. The passage draws our attention to the(fact /importance /problem /advantages)that sb. do sth., from which we know that doing sth (is on heated discussion)(has caused a heated debate) 本文主要关注了做某事的重要性或问题或优势,从中我们知道做某事引起关注或讨论
17. We should bring the advantages of doing sth. into full play and reduce the disadvantages of doing sth. to the minimum. 我们应该把优势最大化,劣势最小化。
笔者认为,考生只要熟练掌握这17个句子,又能灵活运用,在高考写作时能信手拈来,就可以应对高考的读写任务写作了。
2014年高考题
(原文总结答题关键词: a laundrywoman, donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi; lived a very simple life; for students who clearly needed financial help; her much pleasure)
1. 你如何看待她的捐助行为;
2. 你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响;
3. 如果你自己要捐助,你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。endprint
灵活应用17句句式, 迅速成文:
The passage mainly draws our attention to the fact that Oseola McCarty, a laundry woman, who led a very simple life, generously donated her saving to the university for helping the students in financial need, from which she got much pleasure.
I cant agree more with what she did. The reason why I support her doing this is that it is of great importance for the students in need to get better education. Meanwhile,not only will students benefit a lot but also people will follow her good example. Thus, it is the series of good effects that convince me that she was doing the right thing.
It goes without saying that there are at least two good points accounting for it. With the donation, students can strengthen their faith without worrying about the fees. Whats more, students will be able to seek encouragement to live as rich and full a life as others do, carrying on helping others in need, too.
Talking about helping others, I would donate my money to my poor classmates because I know them better. Only if I help them, can they avoid being depressed, disappointed and upset. Consequently, they could manage to meet the challenge and cope with the situation. Therefore, it is of great importance to make this endless effort together with my classmates without being annoyed by the mass media.
From what I have said above, its not difficult to draw a conclusion that we students should follow the example to offer our help like a fire on a winter day. (本文中使用了17句中的14句)
2013年高考题
(原文总结:不喜欢工作原因不是不喜欢而是平凡和分工和重复,平凡工作对社会贡献也很大应该受到尊重)
(1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛;
(2)假如没有清洁工,环境会变得如何?
(3)你对平凡的工作的看法。
灵活应用17句句式, 迅速成文:
The passage mainly draws our great attention to the importance of small and ordinary work because of their essentiality for the organization of the society and those who do such jobs should be respected.
There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is harder compared with any other jobs in the society. There are at least two good points accounting for it. Not only should they get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are sill in the sweet sleeping dreams but also they suffer from less respect and lower pay. It goes without saying that cleaning work is tough but necessary.
Without cleaners, nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live in. The most important reason why I mention this is that maybe we would soon be drowned in mountains of rubbish. Whats worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very high speed, causing a series of threats to our life. Therefore,I cant agree more with the author that ordinary jobs are of great importance to us.endprint
From what I have said above,it is not difficult to draw a conclusion that even the smallest and the most ordinary job is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, it is those doing the most ordinary jobs who convince me that they should get respect as much as those being engineers or teachers.(本文中使用了17句中的14句)
请运用以上17个句式,完成下列读写任务:
GUANGZHOU-At least 25 people have been confirmed dead after typhoon Usagi made a landfall in South Chinas Guangdong province Sunday evening, according to the provincial flood control headquarters.
Electricity and water supply was cut off in the Huilai county, Jieyang city, and house were collapsed as wind speeds at the center exceeded 180 km per hour on Sunday afternoon, said Li Feng, a border police officer of the city, Xinhua reported Sunday.
Intercity trains between Guangzhou, Shenzhen and Zhuhai were suspended at 6 pm and nearly 50 trains, including those along the high-speed lines to Beijing, Shenzhen and Hong Kong, will be suspended until Tuesday, according to the Guangzhou Railway(Group)Corporation.
At a Xiecheng gas station on National Road 324 near Shanwei city, where at 13 of the 25 victims were killed, winds were strong enough to blow cars off the road and all traffic was stopped.
Resident Li Huolong said he was on his way home in Shanwei, when the back window of his car was broken by the wind.
Educational authorities in 14 cities ordered schools to suspend classes on Sunday, a school day in China because of the three-day Mid-Autumn Festival which just ended.
More than 47000 fishing boats are in harbor, with nearly 20000 fishermen kept onshore.
All beaches in the province have been closed
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括短文的主要内容;
2. 以120个词谈谈某种自然灾害,要点包括:
(1)你家乡有哪种自然灾害?常造成哪些破坏?
(2)描述你或朋友在此灾害发生时的一次经历;
(3)你对应这种灾害的建议。
参考范文
The passage mainly draws our attention to the problem that typhoon Usagi struck Guangdong China just after the Mid-autumn Festival and it caused 25 deaths, damaged houses, stopped traffic and transports and cut off electricity supply,keeping fishermen onshore and students off school.
It goes without saying that typhoons and storms are of no surprise in my hometown, usually with strong wind and heavy rain, resulting in trees pulled down, traffic stopped as well as houses in ruins and great deaths and injuries. Therefore, natural disasters not only cause great economic losses but also bring inconvenience to our life.
It goes without saying that natural disasters are extremely common now. I couldnt forget the time when a typhoon hit my hometown last August. It made me miss classes, meeting great challenges in getting life back to normal.
Meeting with disasters doesnt mean that we can do nothing. There are a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. Not only should we do good preparations before the disasters to reduce the losses to the minimum but also we should keep calm and be rational. Therefore, it is of great importance to keep in mind that safety is the best policy. Only if we seek ways to prevent us from being harmed, can we survive the disasters.
总之,有效的句式背诵能够帮助考生在任务写作中快速成文,特别是对于英语学习相对落后的乡镇农村中学的考生来说,加强背诵和训练十几句常用句式,能更好地在任务写作中取得更大进步。
(作者单位:珠海市斗门区和风中学)
责任编校 蒋小青endprint