“问题—建议”类博客的写作

广东 黄园园

❖情境呈现

你的英国网友Jack 正在学习汉语，他在博客中询问如何提高汉语写作能力。请你用英语给他回帖，内容要点如下：

1.你的建议；

2.给出理由。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

❖写作指导

Step 1 文体感知

该写作任务是写一篇“问题—建议”类博客。写此类博客时，可以就自己学习语言中遇到的困难提出问题，也可以回复他人的博客，提出自己的建议，以帮助他人解决问题。提出问题时要简洁、清晰，分析问题时要有条理，逻辑清晰。提出建议时可以从自身经历出发，也可以从客观角度给出解决办法。

Step 2 审题定调

时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。

人称：第一和第二人称。

要点：给出记单词的建议；提出自己的问题并寻求建议。

Step 3 语言组织

一、核心词汇

advice/suggestion 建议

offer/give 提供

enlarge 扩大

vocabulary 词汇

view/opinion 观点

context 语境

phrase 短语

in addition 另外

what's more 而且

instead of 而不是

make up sentences 造句

二、核心句式

提出问题

1.My biggest problem is that...我最大的问题就是……

2.I have difficulty in...我在……方面遇到困难。

3.I have no idea how I should...我不知道我该如何……

4.This is something I failed to...这是我无法……的事情。

5.It is very difficult for me to...对我来说，……非常难。

6.I also have trouble with...我在……方面也遇到了困难。

解决问题

1.There are three ways to improve your...有三种方法可以提升你的……

2.In my opinion,you'd better...在我看来，你最好……

3.It is better for you to...你还是……比较好。

4.When it comes to...,I suggest that...当涉及……时，我建议……

5.You might try to...你或许可以尝试……

6.This worked for me.这对我来说是奏效的。

三、佳作赏析

Hi! Jack.I am so sorry to hear that you're having trouble improving your Chinese writing.I'm more than glad to offer you some suggestions.

A very good way to improve writing is to read other people's articles.If you read plenty of good Chinese articles, you will learn how skillful writers use Chinese to express themselves, and present information in an excellent way.Thus, you can improve your ability to use the language.Like other skills,you should improve your writing by practicing.Keeping a diary is a good idea.It is natural that beginners make mistakes while writing.But don't worry.Finding out why you made the mistakes will help you avoid the same mistakes and enable you to write better.

Step 4 评价导思

General content Basic writing skills√ Do you give a clear description of the problem?√ Is the advice clearly explained?________________√ Does each sentence relate to the main idea?√ Do you use pronouns(代词)to refer to things or people correctly?√ Do you use correct spelling,punctuation(标点符号),and capitalisation(大写)?________________√ Are there any grammar mistakes?

❖小试牛刀

在英语学习的博客上，你看到Susan 说她读英语文章很慢。请你写一篇博客，给她提供一些建议。要点如下：

1.你的建议；

2.你的问题，并寻求建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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