如何写“家庭生活”话题作文

曲永华

一、话题分析

围绕“家庭生活”展开想象， 从不同角度讲述家庭生活方式以及怎样正确地与家庭成员相处的问题，同时培养学生积极向上的家庭观和正确地待人接物的能力。针对这个话题，书面表达可能要求通过说明的方式来“介绍家人和家庭生活”， 还可能从“如何与家人相处”的角度去命题。

二、例题呈现

学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。

内容要点如下：

1. 三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦；

2. 父母为教师，在校深受欢迎；

3. 分担家务，周末进行户外活动；

4. 相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长；

5. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。

注意：

1. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 词数：60～80；

3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；

4. 标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：  popular adj. 受欢迎的    activity n. 活动    rule n. 规矩

My Family

Im Li Ming.

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三、素材准备

词汇

have a happy family， popular in，

get along well with， try ones best to do sth.，

communicate with， work hard...

句子

There are ...

My parents are teachers， they are popular in the school.

... try my best to do some housework.

... go out for outside activities.

Good family rules help me grow up.

四、思路导引

五、佳作展示

My Family

Im Li Ming. I have a happy and warm family. There are three people in my family. They are my father， my mother and I. My parents are the teachers. They are popular in the school. I am a student. And I study hard.

We always communicate with each other. And my family accompanies each other. My family is so harmonious， and we share the things together. My family has a good relationship with our neighbors.

We do the housework together. My mother cooks meals. My father cleans the house. And I do the dishes. The good family rules help me grow up. We always do outdoor actives on the weekend. Sometimes my parents take me to different places to travel. That broadens my horizons.

That is my family. We love each other devotedly. What about you？

六、名师点评

这是一篇优秀的作文，作者很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，并能准确运用时态。同时，作者能够注意保持句子主谓一致，特别是还使用了一些亮点词句，如popular in， communicate with， accompany each other， have a good relationship with， help sb. do 以及grow up。這些词句的使用能增强逻辑关系，使句子通顺、行文连贯。