如何写好观点看法类作文
2021-12-12曲永华
曲永华
一般來说,观点看法类文章除了考查考生的英文基础,还考查考生的逻辑能力。因为写这类文章要有十分清晰的逻辑关系,具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡要顺畅,段落层次要清晰。
技巧应用
[技巧应用 ]
文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成,在修辞中称为“启、承、转、合”。“启”就是开头,“承”就是承接,“转”是转折,“合”是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示“启”的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有:first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示“承”的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有:second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what’s more, what’s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt等。
3. 用于表示“转”的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。
4. 用于“合”的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。此类过渡的词和短语有:in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary等。
总之,要做好书面表达,需要大家把握以下几个原则:细读提示,抓要点;选择句型,准表达;确定线索,巧组合;适当发挥,保完整;规范书写,争高分;细查全文,除笔误。
[掌握步骤]
1.谋篇布局,掌握十句作文法
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,进一步说明和支持主题句。另外,也可调整两句的顺序,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文,共七句。第一句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词语,以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾,简化为一句,是对全文的总结,并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。
2.临危不乱,打开锦囊包
遇到要点不会表达怎么办?词数不达标怎么办?不要急,“一代,五加,一扩”帮你轻松解决问题。“一代,五加,一扩”具体说来就是:
一代:以实代虚——写实;五加: 增加限定语——定语、状语等;增加例子——for example, such as; 增加原因; 加套语(词块);加格言、谚语等进一步说明;一扩:扩充建议——自主发挥,点到即可。
3. 注意事项,稳中求胜
(1) 观点鲜明,文章一定要有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
(2) 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,层次要分明,过渡要自然。
(3) 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
(4)通常采用一般现在时。
(5)语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
写作模板
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循,拿对比观点看法类作文来说,可以先写对比的一方面,再写另外一方面;也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点比较着写。
例如:
The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因一 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.
实战演练
如今,很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式——共享单车(bike-sharing),它因环保、便捷而备受青睐,但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己的看法和建议。
注意:
1. 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名;
3. 词数:80—100(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
【范文赏析】
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It’s known that it has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpful to people’s health.
However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful.
【寫作亮点】
这篇短文内容丰富,表达了所有要点,语言表达准确、意思连贯、符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语,为文章增色,如:It’s known that it has many advantages;First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere;However, it also brings some problems;In this way;For example;In my opinion等。