2022年高考热门话题写作预测(5): 日常生活

2021-01-19蒋建平

疯狂英语·初中版 2021年8期

关键词：虚拟语气被动语态词数

蒋建平

Part 1 激活·素养解读

Part 2 晨读·素材积累

Ⅰ. 读典题·知考向

（2020·全国甲卷）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：

1. 农场情况;

2. 采摘过程;

3. 个人感受。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 题目已为你写好。

My Weekend

◆范文晨诵

My Weekend

Organized by the student union， a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain. There are different kinds of fruit trees.

On arriving， we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders， we first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color， then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn't wait to take a bite， and the sweet juice went down my throat.

I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking， but I could also feast on the sweetness！

◆模板提炼

活动安排介绍

【开头句】

1. There is an activity about traditional Chinese operas at 2：00 pm on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. 7月1日下午两点有一个关于中国戏曲的活动。它将在我们学校的操场上举行，所有的老师和学生都将参加。

2. Summer vacation is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. 暑假快到了，我打算多读书。我要读更多的经典著作和英语书来提高我的语言能力。

3. The International Day of Charity is coming. Many people will do something for it. What should I do？ Here are my ideas. 国际慈善日就要到了。很多人会为此做点什么。我该做些什么呢？这些是我的想法。

【中间句】

1. We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers， we each should say thankful words to our dear teachers. 我们将有一些有意义的活动。为了表达对老师的感谢，我们每个人都应该对我们亲爱的老师说感谢的话。

2. First of all， I will volunteer to do some cleaning with my classmates， such as cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. To keep our school clean， we will ask our schoolmates not to litter at school. 首先，我会自愿和同学们一起做一些清洁工作，比如擦窗户和扫地。为了保持学校的清洁，我们将要求同学们不要在学校乱丢垃圾。

3. Once， our community held an old-thing fair to raise money for the homeless people. 有一次，我们社区举办了一场旧物交易会，为无家可归的人筹款。

【结尾句】

1. It's a chance for you to learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Come and join us！I think well have a great time. 这是一个让你了解中国传统文化的机会。来加入我们吧！我想我们会玩得很開心的。

2. I hope all of our younger schoolmates can live and study happily in our school. 我希望我们所有的年轻同学都能在学校快乐地生活和学习。

3. If possible， you may watch Sichuan Opera. Hope you'll have fun here. 如果可能的话，你可以看川剧表演。希望你在这里玩得开心。

4. In a word， it's helpful for our society to do some charity. Many hands make light work. Take action now to make our society more beautiful！一句话，做一些慈善对我们的社会是有帮助的。众人拾柴火焰高。现在就行动起来，让我们的社会更美好！

◆靓句积累

1. 当你有困难时，你可以依靠我的帮助。

（基础表达）You can rely on my helping you when you are in trouble.

（高级表达）You can rely on it that I will help you when you are in trouble.（含有it作形式宾语的复合句）

2. 我的钱已花完了，因而我买不起这本书。

（基础表达）My money has run out， so I can't afford to buy this book.

（高级表达）My money having been run out of， I can't afford to buy this book.（简单句，含V-ing形式的被动语态）

3. 他经常熬夜看电视，结果身体垮了。

（基础表达）He often stays up to watch TV and his health breaks down.

（高級表达）He often stays up to watch TV， causing his health to break down.（含分词作结果状语）

Ⅱ. 读词句·积语料

一、话题表达

核心词汇：

1. harmonious adj. 和谐的

2. picnic v. 野餐

3. sweep v. 扫

4. cook v. 烹饪

5. housework n. 家务

6. furniture n. 家具

7. equipment n. 设备

8. household n. 家庭

9. entertain v. 招待

10. leisure n. 休闲

11. fishing n. 钓鱼

12. diving n. 潜水

13. sailing n. 航行

14. sunbathe v. 晒太阳

15. relax v. 放松

高频短语：

1. be familiar with 对……熟悉

2. put away 收拾起来

3. iron the shirt 熨烫衬衣

4. make the bed 整理床铺

5. lay the table 摆桌子

6. wake up 醒来

7. put on 穿上

8. go outing 去郊游

9. go camping 去野营

10. take photos 拍照

提分靓句：

1. It+被动语态+that从句

It is widely believed that plenty of fresh air contributes to good health. 人们通常认为呼吸足够的新鲜空气有利于健康。

2. advise+宾语从句（虚拟语气）

The doctor advised that we should have a balanced diet and get into the good habit of getting up early. 医生建议我们要均衡饮食并养成早起的习惯。

3. not...too much表示肯定

We can't emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

4. which引导非限制性定语从句

The majority of people take in too much fat and not enough fibre， which does great harm to their health. 大多数人摄入的脂肪太多，而纤维不足，这对他们的健康有害。

5. There is no doubt that+同位语从句

There is no doubt that such a deed should be encouraged.毫无疑问这种行为应该得到鼓励。

6. it作形式主语

It has been one of the traditional Chinese virtues to help those in trouble. 帮助处在困难中的人一直是中华传统美德之一。

7. advocate +that从句（虚拟语气）

I strongly advocate that all of us should learn from him and always be ready to help others. 我极力提倡我们大家应该向他学习并且随时做好帮助他人的准备。

8. no matter+wh？从句（让步状语从句）

No matter what happens tomorrow， hold on to today and you wont regret.无论明天发生什么，只要紧紧抓住今天，你就不会后悔。

9. have no alternative but+带to的不定式

As natural resources are getting rare， we have no alternative but to get rid of any practice that wastes energy.隨着自然资源变得越来越少，我们别无选择，只有改掉任何浪费能源的习惯。

10. predict +宾语从句

Definitely， if everyone attaches importance to saving energy， we can predict that human beings will have a wonderful future eventually.无疑，如果每个人都重视节约能源，我们可以预测人类最终会有一个美好的未来。

11. be convinced that+宾语从句

I'm convinced that eating together with our family is the perfect time for us to communicate with our parents.我确信和我们的家人一起吃饭是我们与父母交流的最佳时间。

二、续写金库

心理描写

1. He felt the warmth surging through his body. 他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。

2. Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories. 当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，她的双眼蒙上了一层水雾。

3. Her brain quickened and all her senses were alert. 她的大脑快速运转，所有的感官都处于戒备状态。

4. At the sight of the ferocious wolf， I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 一看到那只凶猛的狼，我就感到一种强烈的恐惧，手心在出汗。

5. When the host announced that she won the prize， her heart was thumping with excitement. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心怦怦跳。

6. My mood was as cheerful as a wave. 我的心情像浪花一样欢腾。

7. He can not restrain the joy of heart， like a bird flying into the family. 他抑制不住内心的喜悦，像小鸟一样飞进了家门。

8. Crystal tears， like broken pearls， roll down your cheeks. 晶莹的泪珠，像断了线的珍珠，滚落面颊。