2022年高考热门话题写作预测(4): 人物与描写

蒋建平

Part 1 激活·素养解读

Part 2 晨读·素材积累

Ⅰ. 读典题·知考向

你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为名人画像配上英语介绍，以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇100词左右的短文介绍郎平。

1. 郎平个人简介;

2. 自己的看法。

◆范文晨诵

Lang Ping， who was born on Dec. 10th， 1960， is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much. She began to practise playing volleyball when she was 13 and joined the national team later. She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards. In 2016， she took the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games and won the gold medal. She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in the history of volleyball in China.

In a word， Lang Pings spirit of never giving up inspired so many people. We all praised her role in winning the hard-earned gold medal.

◆模板提炼

人物传记

第一段：

（1）總体介绍人物，包括姓名、身份、地位和主要成就等。

Dian Fossey was regarded as one of the heroines of the 20th century. （总体介绍人物）Her love for the mountain gorillas in Africa taught people about dangers these animals are facing. Dian was an outgoing and kind person， and able to gain valuable data about their lives by becoming a companion to them.

（2）通过概括性的语言来描述人物的特征。常用定语从句来写：

① Einstein， who discovered the “Relativity Theory”， is well known in the world.

② Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers （that） the world has ever known.

③ Shakespeare， who was a son from a poor family， a man of little education， wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.

④ Thomas Edison， born in America， was a great scientist and inventor.

（3）开头常用句式

①Advances in science help all humanity.

科学的进步有助于全人类。

②Professor Green， known to the world as a scientist， is not only diligent but also warm-hearted.

格林教授是一位闻名世界的科学家，他不仅勤勉，而且热心。

③He is a scientist of high prestige.

他是一位有声望的科学家。

第二段：

（1）具体介绍人物，包括成长经历、教育情况、兴趣爱好、性格品质、工作经历、感人事迹、突出成绩、功过是非等。

（2）具体介绍人物（主题句），按时间顺序介绍人物的一生，用议论性的语言刻画人物。

Dian Fossey was born in California in 1932. She graduated from university in 1954 and worked...（具体介绍人物）

（3）主体段落常用句式

①So like any diligent scientist， he set about trying to derive one.

所以，像其他勤奋的科学家一样，他自己尝试着推论出一个来。

②Her name was Marie， and she was an official scientist， studying the properties of magnetism for her doctorate in physics.

她的名字是玛丽，她是一位正式的科学家，为获得物理学博士学位而研究磁性质。

③As the last great scientist of the classical period， he was the first to draw a map that was based on all available knowledge， rather than guesses or imagination.

他作为古典时期最后一位伟大的科学家，成为以知识水平为基础，而不是凭猜测或想象，绘制出地图的第一人。

④She quit all worries and devoted herself to the study of science.

她摆脱了一切烦恼，潜心研究科学。

⑤This is an age not only of great science; it is an age of great scientists.

这不仅是一个伟大的科学时代，这也是一个伟大的科学家时代。

⑥Like all good students of science， he believes that the universe is well understood and we know our place in it.

像所有学习科学的好学生一样，他相信人类完全能够了解宇宙，也了解人类在其中的位置。

第三段：

（1）总结评价人物，包括影响、启示等方面。

Dian Fossey is still alive in our hearts to this day. Thanks to her research， we now know more about mountain gorillas... Without her work， there would be very few mountain gorillas left today.（总结评价人物）

（2）总体评价常见表达：

still live in ones heart 一直活在某人心里

set a good example to 为……树立了一个好的榜样

sing high praise for sb 对某人赞不绝口

think highly of sb 对某人评价很高

be regarded as 被认为是;被当作是

remember sb forever 永远记得某人

let us realize that... 让我们意识到……

have a great effect on sb 对某人有很大的影响

teach us that... 教我们……

（3）结尾常用句式

①The scientist deserves recognition for his talent.

这名科学家的才华值得称赞。

②Finally， Einstein arrived at a conclusion that the maximum speed in the universe is that of light.

最终，爱因斯坦得出了一个结论，宇宙中的最快速度为光速。

③Yuan Longping not only won the battle against hunger， but he could also export his crops abroad.

袁隆平不仅赢得了对抗饥饿的战斗，而且还将自己的农作物出口到国外。

◆靓句积累

1. 郎平因努力练习而获得了很多荣誉。

（基础表达）Lang Ping won a lot of awards because she was hard-working.

（高级表达）Lang Ping was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards.

2. 莫言，本名管謨业，出生在山东一个普通的农民家庭。

（基础表达）Mo Yan's real name is Guan Moye. He was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province.

（高级表达）Mo Yan， whose real name is Guan Moye， was born in an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province.

3. 当他还是一个年轻的农民时，出于对文学的强烈热爱，他致力于各种中国古典文学，并逐渐练习写故事。

（基础表达）While he was working as a young peasant， out of a strong passion for literature， he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories.

（高级表达）While working as a young peasant， out of a strong passion for literature， he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories.

Ⅱ. 读词句·积语料

一、话题表达

核心词汇：

1. independent adj. 自立的

2. optimistic adj. 乐观的

3. ambitious adj. 雄心壮志的

4. energetic adj. 精力充沛的

5. sensible adj. 明智的;合理的

6. strong-minded adj. 意志坚强的

7. stubborn adj. 固执的

8. considerate adj. 考虑周全的;体贴的;体谅的

9. diligent adj. 勤奋的

10. modest adj. 谦虚的

11. handsome adj. 英俊的

12. good-looking adj. 长得好看的

13. outgoing adj. 外向的

14. friendly adj. 友好的

15. committed adj. 尽心尽力的;坚定的

16. thoughtful adj. 深思的;体贴的

17. talented adj. 有才能的

18. straightforward adj. 简单的;坦率的

高频短语：

1. win the award 获奖

2. be active in 对……很积极;积极参加……

3. commit oneself to 某人致力于……

4. a strong/burning passion for 对……强烈的爱

5. be in good health/shape 身体健康

6. medium build 中等身材

7. get good grades 获得好成绩

8. gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名

9. treat others in an honest way 真诚地对待别人

10. devote all one's life to science 某人奉献一生给科学

11. gain a scholarship 获得奖学金

12. be devoted to 致力于……;专注于……

13. be enthusiastic about 对……充满热情;热衷于……

14. be gifted at/in 对……有天赋

15. be honoured as 被誉为……

16. be skilled in 在……方面熟练

提分靓句：

1. without引导虚拟语气

Without Qian Xuesen's devoted work on missiles and rockets， China wouldn't have become such a powerful country/so powerful a country in the world in a short time. 没有钱学森在导弹和火箭方面全心全意的工作，中国就不会在短时间内成为世界上一个如此强大的国家。

2. that引导限制性定语从句

The hybrid rice that Yuan Longping developed has decreased the number of the hungry people around the world greatly. 袁隆平研究出的杂交水稻大大降低了世界上饥饿人口的数量。

3. as +身份

Lang Ping won the Olympic championship as a player and coach. 既是选手又是教练的郎平获得了奥林匹克运动会冠军。

4. in the history of

She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship in the history of volleyball in China. 她是中國排球史上第一个获得奥林匹克运动会冠军的人。

5. devote oneself to +名词

She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country. 她投身于科研，对国家做出了巨大的贡献。

6. be awarded... for...

She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement.她因她的科学成就被授予了诺贝尔化学奖。

7. “It is/was +被强调部分+ that+其余部分”强调句型

It is because of the scientific spirits that the great scientists have made such outstanding achievements. 正是因为科学精神，这些伟大的科学家才取得了如此杰出的成就。

8. so位于句首引起的倒装句

So poor was his family that he had to drop out at the age of 12.他的家庭如此贫困以至于他十二岁时就不得不辍学。

9. although引导让步状语从句

Although it happened three years ago， I never forgot the evening party. 尽管那发生在三年前，但我永远不会忘记那场晚会。

10. “not only... but also”引起的倒装句

Not only should we show respect for the great scientists， but also we should learn the scientific spirits from them. 我们不仅要尊重这些伟大的科学家，而且还要学习他们的科学精神。

二、续写金库

外貌与神态描写

1. Indeed， his sunburnt face and arms and his strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers， for whom he has struggled for the past five decades. 事实上，他晒黑的脸和手臂，以及他强壮的身体，就像他在过去50年为之奋斗的数百万中国农民一样。

2. Alee became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her face. Alee现在开心了，整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。

3. His face split into a wide smile. 他的臉上绽放出灿烂的笑容。

4. Her eyes were glued to the screen. 她目不转睛地盯着屏幕。

5. He gave a glimpse of... from the corner of his eye. 他用眼睛的余光瞥了一眼……

6. With tears streaming down her face， words failed her. 眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。

Part 3 晚练·素养检测

你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“My most respectful teacher”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1. 人物简介;

2. 尊敬的原因。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My most respectful teacher

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers， parents or one of our elders.