2022年高考热门话题写作预测(6): 做人与做事

蒋建平

Part 1 激活·素养解读

Part 2 晨读·素材积累

Ⅰ. 读典题·知考向

一天，小韩在去拜访朋友的路上看见一位受伤的妇女躺在地上，他毫不犹豫地打电话叫来了司机并送她去了医院。请以“Should we help others in need？”为题发表自己的看法。

内容包括：

1. 事情的经过;

2. 你的感想。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 文章的开头已為你写好，不计入总词数。

Should we help others in need？

Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.

◆范文晨诵

Should we help others in need？

Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.

One day， Xiao Han paid a visit to his friends. On his way he saw a woman lying on the street， for being hurt in the traffic accident.Although there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps， he didn't hesitate， called the driver to stop right away and sent her to the hospital. Then he paid the treatment expenses by himself and tried to contact her family.

As the saying goes， helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe we'd have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed！

◆模板提炼

观点类作文一

The topic of ①（主题） is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②（支持A的理由一）. What is more，③（理由二）. Moreover，④（理由三）.

While others think that B is a better choice for the following three reasons. Firstly，

⑤（支持B的理由一）. Secondly （Besides），⑥（理由二）. Thirdly （Finally），⑦（理由三）.

From my point of view， I think ⑧（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨（原因）. As a matter of fact， there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me， the former is surely a wise choice.

观点类作文二

There is a widespread concern over the issue that                 （主题）. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that（观点一）.

In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude. In the first place，

（原因一）. Furthermore， in the second place，（原因二）. So it goes without saying that （观点一）.

People， however， differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that

（观点二）. In their point of view， on the one hand，（原因一）. On the other hand，（原因二）. Therefore， there is no doubt that               （观点二）.

As far as I am concerned， I firmly support the view that （观点一或二）. It is not only because（原因一）， but also because （原因二）. The more，the more.（总结）

◆靓句积累

1. 不管事情有多枯燥，他都会全身心地去做所做之事，为我们树立一个好榜样。

（基础表达）No matter how boring it is， he will devote himself to what he does and set a good example to us.

（高级表达）By being devoted to what he does， no matter how boring it is， he sets a good example to us.（by+V-ing形式）

2. 他的人格魅力在于一个简单的事实：对帮助别人他从不犹豫。

（基础表达）He has charming personality， and facts show that he never hesitates to help others.

（高级表达）His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others.（同位语从句）

3.他对所有人及自己所做的任何事情都严格要求，这让他深受人们的爱戴。

（基础表达）He is strict with everybody and in everything he does， so he is deeply loved and respected by people.

（高级表达）He is strict with everybody and in everything he does， which makes him deeply loved and respected.（which引导非限制性定语从句）

4. 我真的很想采访他，因为他不仅是第一个去太空的中国人，也是世界上最伟大的宇航员之一。

（基础表达）I would really like to interview him because he is the first Chinese to go to space and one of the greatest astronauts in the world.

（高級表达）I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space， but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.（not only...， but also...）

Ⅱ. 读词句·积语料

一、话题表达

核心词汇：

1. observe v. 观察;监视;庆祝;遵守;评论

observation n. 观察

2. quality n. 品质

3. thoughtful adj. 考虑周到的

thoughtfully adv. 沉思地;体贴地;亲切地

4. mean adj. 小气的

5. modest adj. 谦虚的;谦逊的

modesty n. 谦逊

6. plain adj. 朴素的;简单的

plainly adv. 明白地;坦率地

7. virtue n. 美德;正直的品性

8. moral adj. 道德的;道义上的n. 品行;道德;寓意

9. precious adj. 珍稀的;宝贵的

10. seize v. 抓住（时机等）

11. satisfied adj. 满意的

satisfaction n. 满意

12. dependable adj. 可信赖的;可信任的

dependability n. 可靠性;可信任

13. concerned adj. 忧虑的;关注的

14. inspire v. 鼓励

15. tend v. 照顾;照料;倾向;趋于

16. eager adj. 渴望的

eagerly adv. 热切地;渴望地

17. assist v. 帮助;援助

assistance n. 帮助;援助;支持

assistant n. 助手;助理

18. energy n. 活力;精力;能源;能量

energetic adj. 精力充沛的;充满活力的

高频短语：

1. can not help doing sth情不自禁地做某事

2. carry sb through sth帮助某人渡过难关

3. assist sb in/with sth在某事上帮助某人

4. assist sb in doing sth帮助某人做某事

5. assist sb to do sth帮助某人做某事

6. come to one's assistance 前来援助

7. be delighted to do sth高兴地做某事

8. long for sb to do sth渴望某人做某事

9. crowd in （想法、问题等）涌入脑海

10. focus/concentrate on 集中于

11. have an optimistic attitude towards 对……有乐观的态度

12. be touched/moved to tears 感动得流泪

13. have a strong desire to do sth对做某事有强烈的愿望

14. with a smile on ones face 面带笑容

提分靓句：

1. be thankful for+名词

I am thankful for all of those who said NO to me. Its because of them（that） I'm doing it myself. 我感谢所有对我说不的人，因为他们，我独立做了一些事。（Albert Einstein）

2. who引导表语从句

You are essentially who you create yourself to be and all that occurs in your life is the result of your own making. 从本质上来说，你就是你自己所塑造的人，你生命中发生的一切都是你自己创造的结果。（Stephen Richards）

3. enable sb to do sth使得某人能够做某事

I believe the practice of self-awareness is one of the greatest skills in life because it enables you to learn about yourself in a way no one else can ever teach you. 我相信自我意识的实践是生活中最伟大的技能之一，因为它能够使你以别人无法教你的方式了解自己。

4. be presented with+名词被授予……

Life is a journey， filled with ups and downs. With each challenge， each hurdle， we are presented with an opportunity to grow as a person. 人生是一段充满坎坷的旅程。伴随着每一次挑战、每一个障碍，我们都有机会成长为人。

5. so long as只要

Nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.只要有坚强的意志和勇敢的心，没什么可怕的。

6. a look into+名词调查;窥探

These words of Dr Lin Qiaozhi give us a look into the heart of this amazing woman， and what carried her through a life of hard choices. 从林巧稚医生的这番话中，我们可以看到这位伟大女性的内心世界，以及到底是什么支撑着她走过充满艰难抉择的一生。

7. 现在分词短语作状语

Though Lin Qiaozhi never married， she was known as the “mother of ten thousand babies”， having delivered over 50，000 babies in her lifetime. 虽然林巧稚终身未婚，但是她被称为“万婴之母”，她一生中亲手接生的婴儿有五万多名。

8. “否定词+比较级+than”表达肯定

As a student， I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates. 作为学生，我可以告诉你，没有任何事情比得上在同学面前受到老师的表扬。

9. since引导状语从句

Since it is unlikely to avoid failure in the process of achieving success， we should have the right attitude towards it. 既然在获得成功的过程中不可能避免失败，我们就应该对失败有正确的态度。

二、续写金库

动作描写

1. She hugged them to her chest， and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile. 她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头来，泪流满面地微笑着。

2. He gave a jump in the air， twirled， ran a few steps， stopped， looked all around， sniffed the smells of afternoon， and then set off walking down through the orchard.他先是蹦跶了一下，原地转了几圈，再跑上几步，又停了下来，四下望了望，嗅了嗅午后空气的味道，然后一路跑进了果园。

3. Alice started to her feet， for it flashed across her mind that she had never before seen such a rabbit， and burning with curiosity， she ran across the field after it. 爱丽丝跳了起来，因为她突然想到她从来没见过这样的兔子。她好奇地穿过田野，追赶那只兔子。

4. We got into his car and drove up the road， stopped a few houses down from the tree.我们上了车，开上道路，然后停在了离这棵树有些距离的地方。

5. Abel was quick. Good Lord， he was fast. The ringleader had made a dash for it， trying to climb over a hall. Abel grabbed him， pulled him down and dragged him back. 埃布爾跑得很快。天啊！这个元凶往前冲，试图翻爬过大厅。但是埃布尔抓住他，把他拉下来并且拖了回去。

6. I ran back home， smiling and skipping along. 我蹦蹦跳跳地笑着跑回家。

Part 3 晚练·素养检测

当今社会有人想助人为乐却又有所顾虑。请你给校英文报写一封信，讲述你的同学李华在放学途中帮助一位摔伤老人的事情。

要点如下：

1. 事情的经过;

2. 你的感想。

注意：

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor，

Nowadays， some people are reportedly unwilling to help others.

Yours，

Reader