2022年高考热门话题写作预测（16）：交通与旅游

蒋建平

Ⅰ. 读典题·知考向

假定你是李华，今年暑假与父母去了拉萨旅游。请根据下列内容要点用英语写一篇短文。内容要点：

1. 对旅游列车的描述;

2. 沿途风光;

3. 你的感受。

注意：

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：服务员 attendant 拉萨 Lhasa

◆范文晨誦

I will never forget my first trip to Lhasa. I went there with my parents during this summer vacation.

The cruise train is wide， bright and modern， which makes it quite comfortable. The attendants on the train provided us with the best service. Smiling faces and polite words were around us all the time. Whats more， I appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way. The large， snowcovered mountains， the endless grassland and some villages in the mountains made me excited.

It was really an unforgettable journey. I look forward to travelling there again.

◆模板提炼

如何写游记

I took a trip to （地点） with （同行人员） during （时间）. It took us

（时间） to （交通方式） to （目的地） from （始发地）. We stayed in

（居住地点）. On the first day， （具体行程）. On the second day， （同行人员） and I went to （景点）.

（景点描述）. When we got there， （景点状况）.

（景点活动）. （购买的物品描述）. On the third day， （具体行程）. （描述景点状况）. （景点活动及感受）. The other days， I went to   （其他旅游景点）. （景点活动及感受）.

如何介绍城市

Welcome to my hometown—the city of （城市名称）. （城市名称） is （城市位置及其特点）. The climate here is （气候特征及其对城市的影响）. The scenery is （描述风景概貌）. （概述吸引游客的风景）. （描述具体的自然风景）. Whats more， （描述当地人文风情）. （当地美食概述）.

Im sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown.

◆靓句积累

1. 直到五年后我再次回到家乡时，我才发现它的变化如此之大。

（基础表达）I didnt realize how great the change was until five years later when I went back to my hometown.

（高级表达）It was not until five years later when I went back to my hometown that I realized how great the change was. （强调句型）

2. 她打包好东西后，她的父母为她送行。

（基础表达）She packed up all her luggage， and her parents saw her off.

（高级表达）With all her luggage packed up， her parents saw her off. （含with的复合结构）

3. 通过这次旅游，她更多地了解了外面的世界，从而拓宽了她的知识面。

（基础表达）From the tour， she learnt more about the outside world， and it broadened her knowledge.

（高级表达）From the tour， she learnt more about the outside world， which broadened her knowledge. （含非限制性定语从句）

4. 一到达山顶，我们就深深地被这里美丽的风景所吸引。

（基础表达）Immediately we arrived at the top of the hill， the beautiful scenery attracted us deeply.

（高级表达）On arriving at the top of the hill， we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery. （on+Ving形式）

5. 正如大家所知道的，华山因它险峻的悬崖而出名。

（基础表达）We all know that Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs.

（高級表达）As is known to us all， Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs. （含非限制性定语从句）

6. 到了我们应该高度重视保护环境的时候了。

（基础表达）Its time for us to pay much attention to protecting our environment.

（高级表达）Its high time that we paid much attention to protecting our environment. （含Its high time that...句型）

Ⅱ. 读词句·积语料

一、话题表达

核心单词：

1. subway/underground n. 地铁

2. helicopter n. 直升机

3. motorcycle n. 摩托车

4. abroad adv. 在/到国外

5. crowded adj. 拥挤的

6. destination n. 目的地;终点

7. queue n. 行列;队

8. impress v. 留下极深的印象

impression n. 印象

impressive adj. 给人深刻印象的;令人难忘的

9. wellorganized adj. 组织良好的

10. trip n. 旅行;短程旅游

11. journey n. 行程;旅程

12. tour n. 游览;旅游;旅行

13. voyage n. 航海;航行;航程

14. adventure n. 冒险;奇遇

15. outdoors adv. 在户外/野外

16. parking n. 停车

17. souvenir n. 纪念品

高频短语：

1. be/get stuck in 被困在……

2. check in 登记入住

3. check out 结账离开

4. put up 投宿

5. take off 起飞

6. rush hour （上下班的）高峰期

7. traffic jam 交通堵塞

8. traffic signal/light 交通信号灯

9. obey/observe traffic regulations 遵守交通规则

10. run the red light 闯红灯

11. an organized travel 一场有组织的旅游

12. go on a hiking trip 进行徒步旅行

13. be on a visit to a place 在参观/访问某地

14. places of interest 名胜

15. scenic spot 风景区

16. be surrounded with/by 被……环绕

17. be aimed at 针对;旨在

18. break the speed limit 超速

19. speed up 加速

20. slow down 放慢速度

21. set off 出发

22. get close to nature 接近大自然

23. be the home of/be home to 是……之乡/的乐土

24. enjoy the reputation of 有……的美誉

提分靓句：

1. thus+Ving形式

People prefer to choose highspeed trains because they move very fast， thus shortening the travelling time. 人们更喜欢选择高速列车，因为高速列车运行速度很快，从而缩短旅行时间。

2. “no matter+疑问词”引导让步状语从句

No matter how many subway lines， buses， trams， trains， and other public conveyances we ride， we are rarely left with a good impression of the upholstery. 无论我们坐多少次地铁、公共汽车、有轨电车、火车和其他公共交通工具，我们很少会对座位垫衬套留下一个好的印象。

3. be always doing sth

Im always dreaming about my next trip and Im often scouring the Web for exciting new vacation destinations. 我总是梦想着我的下一次旅行，并且我经常在网上搜令人兴奋的新的度假目的地。

4. 过去分词短语作状语

Attracted by its natural beauty， we couldnt help taking lots of pictures， cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history. 我们被它的自然美景所吸引，忍不住拍了很多照片，以此来留住与自然和历史亲近的美好记忆。

5. 强调句型

It was through this traveling that I realized not only did I increase more knowledge， but I also broadened my horizons and strengthened my love for my family. 正是通过此次旅游，我意识到我不仅增长了知识，而且还开阔了视野，同时也加深了对家人的爱。

6. 主语从句

What makes it distinguishable from other resorts is that it is rich in natural resources and primitive forests. 与其他景区不同的是，这里自然资源丰富，还有原始森林。

二、续写金库

1. People love to travel， not to reach their destination， but to enjoy the pleasure of the journey. 人之所以爱旅行，不是为了抵达目的地，而是为了享受旅途中的种种乐趣。

2. A true traveler is a tramp， who experiences joy， temptation and adventure. A journey must be a wandering， or it will not be a journey.一个真正的旅行家必定是一个经历着快樂、诱惑和冒险的流浪者。旅行必是流浪式的，否则便不称其为旅行。

3. The advantage of travel is that you can be far away from the daily life， and you dont have to bear the responsibilities of the daily trifles. 旅行的好处在于你可以暂时远离日常生活，还不必承担日常琐事的责任。

4. Cuihu is not only a lake， but also a road. There are lakes in the city， which do not hinder traffic. 翠湖不仅是一片湖，也是一条路。城中有一些湖，它们并不妨碍交通。

5. The roads on the hillside are mostly along the bank. Although the cliff is on one side， the cliff is not close to the side， and the ditch is on the other side. You will feel dizzy when you look at it. 山坡上的路多是沿畔，虽一边靠崖，却不贴崖，另一边临沟，望之便要头晕。

6. When the play should start， more and more people gathered outside， cutting off the street and blocking the traffic. The number of people far exceeded the capacity of the theater.在戏应该开场的时候，门外的人越聚越多，隔断了街道，堵塞了交通。人数远远超出剧场能容纳的数量。

Part 3 晚练·素养检测

你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以“A holiday I have taken”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1. 去哪里度了假;

2. 假期中做了什么。

注意：

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

A holiday I have taken

Last winter vacation， I went to Hainan with my parents.