HongZe Lake

江苏省淮安市洪泽实验小学四（8）班 张晨桐

My hometown is HongZe.It is famous for HongZe Lake.The lake is one of the fresh water lakes in our country.It is big and wide.The water is so clean that plenty of fishes and lobsters live in it.You can also eat crabs every autumn.They are very delicious and appetizing.Welcome to my hometown.You will love it.

点评：小作者通过简洁的语言、生动的描写让读者很快了解到洪泽湖的水真清，洪泽湖的美食很多，让人迫不及待想去她的家乡看一看。