旅游交通

吴安运

◎文体概述

本话题主要涉及旅游、询问与预订、交通方式、指路与问路、安全条例与警告等。针对本话题，高考命题人员可能会从以下几种角度来命题：

1. 旅游计划的拟订、旅游准备及注意事项;

2. 酒店、景点等的预订及费用;

3. 国外旅游注意事项;

4. 太空旅游、生态旅游;

5. 护照、签证的申办及其费用;

6. 度假方式的变化及其原因;

7. 描述旅游经历;

8. 问路与指路;

9. 私家车激增的利与弊;

10. 交通方式的变化及其对人们生活的影响;

11. 交通安全。

◎写作模板

It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel， you will see

_______. Besides， you can _______ . Finally， you can _______ .

People travel for various reasons. Some travel for pleasure. Some ________. And others .

Traveling makes an open man. You may ________.

模板范文

It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel， you will see beautiful scenery， meet and make friends with different people and understand the customs of the local people.

People travel for various reasons. Some travel for pleasure. Some travel to enjoy more delicious foods. And others travel for a broader horizon.

Traveling makes an open man. You may have read or heard about something， but you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it by yourself. If you want to enrich your life， how I hope you can travel with me.

◎经典句型

1. I think the train is much safer than the airplane. 我覺得火车比飞机安全多了。

2. It is the first time for me to come to Beijing. 这是我第一次来北京。

3. With a long history， Beijing is rich in tourist attractions. 北京历史悠久，名胜古迹众多。

4. The scenery is charming！ 这里景色迷人！

5. Great changes have taken place in the ways that people spend their holidays over the period from the year 1998 to 2018. 在1998年至

2018年间，人们的度假方式已经发生了巨大的变化。

6. The best time to visit Hainan is between November and March. 来海南游玩的最佳时间是在11月至3月。

7. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. 他们说大量的游

客涌到动物园会导致交通阻塞。

8. However， others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. 然而，其他人喜欢出去旅游，是因为这既可以增长知识，又可以开阔视野。

9. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest， such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 四川省旅游资源丰富，有许多世界著名的风景名胜，如九寨沟、都江堰水利工程。

10. Besides， the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. 此外，这里的好天气以及便利的交通会让你的旅行更加愉悦。

11. At 7：00 on the morning of October 1， well visit the Great Wall. 10月1号上午7点我们将游览长城。

12. What's more， riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. 更为重要的是，骑自行车对我们来说是一种很好的锻炼，同时也对我们的健康有利。

13. As is known to all， with the improvement of our living standards， cars have become a popular means of transport， bringing great convenience to our life. 众所周知，随着我们生活水平的提高，小汽车变成一种受欢迎的交通工具，给我们的生活带来很大的便利。

◎典题链接

你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 你建议的线路;

2. 你的理由;

3. 你的祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

_______________________________

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Yours，

Li Hua

【试题解读】

1. 审题立意

该篇书面表达采用的是应用文的考查形式，写作任务要求考生根据提示写一封回信。從测试内容上来看，回信的主题与旅游有关，所供选路线均为中国著名景点，一方面提醒考生要走进大自然、享受自然之美，另一方面也教育学生热爱祖国。

从提示上来看，题干所提供的两条路线没有给出具体的内容，试题的写作要点也没有给出具体的细节，而只是宽泛的提示，所以具有很大的开放性，这要求考生结合自己对长江或泰山的了解罗列出有用的写作素材来合理组织写作。因此，该写作任务提醒考生写作的灵感往往来源于生活，所以我们平时应多关注生活，在生活中不断积累写作素材，这样才不至于在写作中无话可说。因试题已经给出了书信的格式，所以考生不必考虑和担心书信格式的正确与否，可以直接根据自己的写作安排展开写作。

2. 写作要点

（1）信件开头简短的寒暄和导入;

（2）推荐路线：长江之行或泰山之旅;

（3）说明为对方推荐该路线的理由;

（4）祝对方旅游愉快。

3. 注意事项

（1）路线选择应以自己对该路线有较好的了解为基础;

（2）所给出的理由应具有说服力。

【佳作赏析1】

Dear Jim，

Hearing that youll visit China， I advise you to have a trip to Mount Tai. ①

Mount Tai， which is crowned the most famous of China's five great mountains②， attracts millions of tourists every year. It has a long history and has witnessed the changes of Chinese old civilization. Although climbing it is not that easy， you can build up your body. ③ In the meanwhile④， the beautiful spots are sure to attract you all the way.

Therefore， choosing to travel to Mount Tai is a good choice.⑤ I hope that you can have a good time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

亮点分析：本篇习作语言朴实自然，符合书信的写作特点。文章语言十分简洁，但含有丰富的内容。推荐对方登泰山的原因介绍为文章写作重点，笔墨颇多，让读者对泰山有深入的了解，很好地达到了写作的目的。文中crown、 witness等高级词汇的使用体现了考生丰富的词汇知识。in the meanwhile、 therefore等过渡词的使用更是让文章浑然一体，结构紧凑。总之，该篇习作很好地完成了写作任务，理应为一篇高考满分作文。

①文章开头不拖泥带水，直入主题。其中Hearing that youll visit China为现在分词短语，在句中作状语。

②这是一个非限制性定语从句，其中使用了crown这一高级词汇，说明泰山的名气，增加了说服力。

③这是一个由although引导的让步状语从句，该句说明了建议对方登泰山的理由。

④此处In the meanwhile用作过渡词，该过渡词使用贴切，并很自然地引出了登泰山的另一个理由。

⑤该句以therefore对上文作出总结，该句中的choosing to travel to Mount Tai为动名词作主语。

【佳作赏析2】

Dear Jim，

Im glad to hear that youre paying a visit to China. As for your travel route， Id like to recommend that you  have a trip along the Changjiang River.①

As we all know， the Changjiang River is a symbol of China and it is the longest river in China， representing the long history of China.② Therefore， not only can you appreciate the beautiful scenery but you can also have a good knowledge of Chinese culture in the trip.③ Besides， because the river runs through ten provinces and cities， you can taste various Chinese delicious foods.④

I hope that you can have a wonderful time in China.⑤

Yours，

Li Hua

亮点分析：本篇习作考生向对方推荐长江之行，文章所给理由充分，即说明了可以欣赏美景，了解中国文化，还可以品尝中华美食。文章内容丰富，行文流畅，结构明晰。全文多处使用復杂句，分词作状语、主从复合句、虚拟语气等，这都体现了考生较全面的语法知识，而represent、have a good knowledge of、various等高级词汇的使用也体现出考生扎实的语言功底。

①在recommend后是一个宾语从句，该从句用（should）do这一虚拟语气结构。

②该句中的as we all know引导非限制性定语从句，representing为现在分词作状语。

③这是一个not only...but also...结构，not

only放在主语前，句子使用了部分倒装结构。

④此处because引导一个原因状语从句，该句说出了进行长江之行的又一理由。

⑤文章最后用简洁的语言表达了考生的祝愿。

参考范文

Dear Jim，

From your last letter， I've known that you'll visit China. I'd prefer to recommend that you climb Mount Tai， which is located in Shandong Province.

Mount Tai has an altitude of 1，545 meters. There are more than 6，000 steps to climb if you want to get to the top of it. Consequently， climbing Mount Tai is really a challenge. How'ever， you can test your perseverance by climbing it. At the same time， the beautiful scenery will surely leave you a deep impression.

I hope you can have a great time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

◎小试牛刀

假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：

1. 参加者;

2. 时间、地点;

3. 活动：登山、野餐等。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Chris，

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Yours，

Li Hua