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My dream

2019-01-11江苏省淮安市洪泽实验小学五

小学时代 2019年21期
关键词:洪泽淮安市心声

江苏省淮安市洪泽实验小学五(8)班 晋 诺

My dream is to be a teacher.First I want to take my students to the zoo to see animals.I will teach them to love the animals.People and animals should live in harmony.Then We will go into the nature to study the plants and enjoy the air and sunshine.Finally I will take them to the library to read more books,not only Chinese,Maths and English.I will teach them how to learn and how to live.

【点评】

小作者通过描写三个游览过的地方,表达了自己的心声,她呼吁大家关爱动物,走进自然,学会生活和学习。全文条理清晰,语言简明生动。

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