A Lonely Deer and Me

陕西省西安市高陵区崇皇中学七年级三班 于思航

About the picture: There is a deer in the picture. The deer plays in the forest all day. It’s getting dark. The deer is on his way home. There is a river in front of him. He runs across the bridge. His home is near the river. Then he can meet his parents. They will have a happy Christmas!

I’m a junior high school student. I live with my grandparents. My mother is a worker. She works in a factory far away from my home. My father is a teacher of English.He works in a primary school in another town. On Christmas day in 2017, I couldn’t meet my parents. So I drew this picture. But the winter holiday is coming. I hope I can stay with my parents in a small house. We’ll have a happy winter holiday.

宋军良老师点评：

小小的一幅画作，体现了小作者对家人的思念之情，也反映了目前中国社会留守儿童的问题。此画作于去年圣诞节前夕。作者首先描述了画面，然后简要介绍了自己的情况以及画作想要表达的情绪，思路清晰，语言简洁。