An Introduction to Luo Xuejuan

作者：高2018级（2）班 赵倩俨

指导老师：应 斌

An Introduction to Luo Xuejuan

作者：高2018级（2）班 赵倩俨

指导老师：应 斌

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Luo Xuejuan, nicknamed “Luoluo,” is a 23-year-old female from Zhejiang Province, who announced her retirement due to health problems, and is going to Peking University for further study.

When it comes to her experience as an outstanding swimmer, she has devoted herself to swimming since she was young, showing an extraordinary talent in 2000. Three years later, her diligence[勤奋], persistence[坚持]and genius[天赋]eventually paid off—three gold medals at the Barcelona World Championships. Besides, she broke the world record in 2004, becoming the champion of swimming at the Athens Olympics.

It is Luo Xuejuan who has taught us a lesson that “no pains, no gains.” And we should embark upon[开始]a new journey instead of complaining when we are confronted with[面临]obstacles[障碍]and challenges in life. All in all, she is not only a great swimmer, but also a good example worth being followed.

老师点评：这是一篇介绍人物的课后习作。文章采用典型的“三段式”结构：第一段陈述罗雪娟的基本信息，第二段描述她的经历和成就，第三段是作者对罗雪娟的评价。这篇习作最大的特点是作者在文中很恰当地运用了定语从句、时间状语从句、强调句等丰富句式，体现出作者较强的英语语言运用能力。