Learn to Smile

Learn to Smile

As the saying goes, attitude is everything. Since a smile is a positive attitude, we can often smile to ourselves to become confdent and happy. Although there are some situations where we may experience hardship or even failure, we can always smile to ourselves. It can help us overcome many diffculties as well as succeed in the end.

Learning to smile to others is also benefcial. When we smile to others, we can get a smile in return. Then it can put us in a good mood. What’s more, it can also help with a good relationship with others.

In one word, smiling is a language which can help others understand us better. Therefore, let’s start to smile and live a better and happier life.

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学 九年（1）班 刘雅洁

陈传光老师点评：

本文脉络清晰，十分有条理性。第一句话以谚语导入，别具匠心。文中多处使用高级词汇和句式，如原因状语从句、让步状语从句、定语从句及非谓语动词，这些都是文章的亮点。小作者全篇保持着同一个基调，观点鲜明，富有说服力。过渡词then、in one word等的使用也是恰到好处。总的来说，本文不愧为一篇佳作。