高考英语人物介绍类书面表达题导写

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一、文体概述

人物介绍分为人物故事和人物推介。一般是针对所写的人的基本情况作简单的描述，其主要篇幅应是叙述其事迹或在某个领域中作出的贡献。最后简要地对人物进行评价。

二、必备短语

1. a 1.80-meter-tall boy一个高1.8米的男孩

2. an 18-year-old boy 一个18岁的男孩

3. at the age of five在五岁时

4. be experienced in 在……方面有经验

5. have a gift for 有……的天赋

6. be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康

7. graduate from... 从……毕业

8. major in 以……為专业

9. get a masters degree 获得硕士学位

10. be given the title of... 获得……称号

11. win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌

12. gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名

三、套用句式

1. I am an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates. I do well in most of my subjects， especially in English. 我是一个性格外向的女孩，能与所有的同学相处得很好。我的大部分功课都学得很好，尤其是英语。

2. I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the best speaker for my excellent performances. 我曾经在我们城市举办的英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖，由于出色的表现我被评为最佳演讲者。

3. Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. 海伦给我们大家树立了一个极好的榜样。

4. I have a strong personality. No matter what difficulty I meet， I dont give up easily. 我个性坚强，不论遇到什么困难，我都不会轻易放弃。

5. He was strict with everybody and in everything he did. One day， we were having classes when...他对任何人以及他所做的任何事情都很严格。有一天，我们正上着课，这时，突然……

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Of all my teachers， Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34， he looks very young to his age. And hes one of the most popular teacher in our school.

Comparing with other teachers， Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various of ways to make his classes lively or interesting. In his opinion， he should not only know“what”， but also understand“why”. However， instead of giving us answers immediately， he encourage us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help， weve learned how to analyze and settle problems. How a wonderful world of“why”he leads us to！

He is such learned person that we all admire him very much.

五、课堂练习

假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位清朝人物——魏源。请你给Jim回信，

要点如下：

1. 魏源，清朝人，思想家；

2. 著有《海国图志》一书，将新的技术和思想传入中国；

3. 该人物对你的影响。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已为你写出。

生词：《海国图志》Haiguo Tuzhi （Maps and Records of the World）

Dear Jim，

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Yours，

Li Hua

六、课外作业

受你校英文小报所邀，请根据下面表格写一篇短文，介绍屠呦呦。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：药学家 chemist； 青蒿素 Qinghaosu； 疟疾malaria

Tu Youyou， the First Chinese Woman to Win the Nobel Prize

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参考答案与范文

习作修改

本文介绍了我的老师Mr. Moore。他教学生动有趣，带领我们探究神奇的世界，他的教学方式给我留下了深刻的印象。

1. to→for 对于某个年龄来说，应该用介词for。

2. teacher →teachers因one of后一定用名词复数形式或代词的复数形式。

3. Comparing→Compared 就其逻辑主语Mr. Moore来说，应该是被比较，用过去分词。另外，compared with（与……比起来）也可看作固定词组。

4. 刪去of 因various为形容词，其后直接接名词。

5. or→and 此处应该为生动且有趣，不是选择关系。

6. he→we 根据文意，是“我们（学生）”应该不仅要……而且要……，故用we。

7. However→So/Therefore 承接前文，此处是因果关系，不是转折意义。

8. encourage→encourages 主语为第三人称单数时，谓语动词不能是原形，文中基本时态是一般现在时。

9. How→What 感叹句型，其后中心词是名词，应该用What。

10. 在such和learned之间加a因person为可数名词单数形式，应有不定冠词。a learned person意为“一个有学问的人”。

课堂练习

Dear Jim，

Its great to hear from you. I feel proud to know youre interested in Chinese history， especially Wei Yuan， a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. And I will introduce you something about him.

He， in his book， Haiguo Tuzhi （Maps and Records of the World）， introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact， he inspires me to major in English in college， to be a bridge between China and the world.

Are you interested in knowing more？I can find you some books！ Just let me know.

Cheers！

Yours，

Li Hua

课外作业

Tu Youyou， the First Chinese Woman to Win the Nobel Prize

Tu Youyou， a famous female chemist and scientist， was born in Zhejiang Province in 1930.

In 1951， she was admitted into Beijing University， majoring in making medicine and graduated in 1955. Since then， she has been devoted to studying traditional Chinese medicine and modern western medicine. In 1972， she succeeded in discovering and developing Qinghaosu out of a Chinese herb to cure those patients of malaria in different places of the world， for which she won many big awards. She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine on October 5th， 2015， becoming the first Chinese woman scientist to win the Nobel Prize.

All of us Chinese are proud of her and her achievement. She has indeed set an excellent example to us students.

责任编辑 蒋小青