高考英语全国卷中留言条写作导练

张路宁

一、文体概述

留言条开篇须有称呼语，日期部分可写在右上角，结尾须署姓名在正文的右下角；留言条（也可称为便条）虽简单，但中心务必突出，讲清楚写给谁、什么事、谁写以及写于什么时候。注意以第一或第三人称的形式给第二人称写留言条。

二、常用短语

1. wont be back until 5：00 p.m. 直到下午5点才回来

2. return the book to the library把书还给图书馆

3. meet at Coffee Room在咖啡屋见面

4. have something important to do有重要的事情要做

5. feel very sorry about ...对……感到抱歉

6. inform him of this change告知他这个变化

7. leave ... for ... 离开……去……

8. so that ... 以便……

9. be out shopping外出购物

10. be ill in bed卧病在床

三、套用句式

1. It was thoughtful /considerable of you ... 你很体贴……

2. We are delighted to receive ... 我们很高兴能收到……

3. Thank you so much for ... 非常感谢你的……

4. We are going to ... 我们将要做……

5. Lets set some other time for the meeting. 让我们另约见面时间。

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

March 21

Mrs. Wilson，

I am going out shop， and wont be back at about 5：00 p.m. I have taken with me the two book you asked me to return back to the City Library.

In about one oclock this afternoon， Tracy called， said that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend. She felt very sorry about that， and said that you could set some other time for meeting. She wants you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan for this change.

Yours

Li Hua

五、课堂练习

假定你是李华，本已约好与Kelvin今天（4月8日）晚上一起看电影《捉妖记》（Monster Hunt）。但你临时有事找他未果，他打篮球未回，故给他写留言条。要点如下：

1. 临时有事要做。

2. 具体更改的见面时间、地点。

3. 此事已告知谁。

4. 见字告知。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

April 8

Hi Kelvin，

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

六、课外作业

假定你是李华，你到一个叫Alex的同学家，叫他帮忙做一件事，碰巧他不在家。因此，你给他写了一张留言条，要点如下：

1. 请他代你参加明天（3月12日）的植树活动。

2. 集合地点，如何出发。

3. 天气情况。

4. 自备的东西。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

March 11

Dear Alex，

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

參考答案

习作修改

本文是李华告知Mrs. Wilson，Tracy明天早上不能如时赴约，请Mrs. Wilson回家后尽快回复Tracy。

1. shop →shopping 因go shopping为固定搭配，表示“去购物”。

2. at →until/till 因not ... until/till（直到……才）是固定搭配。

3. book →books 因為是两本书，book可数，应该用其复数形式。

4. 去掉return后的back因return=give back，不再用back。

5. In →At 具体时间点，用介词at。

6. said →saying 动作是主语Tracy发出，用现在分词充当伴随状语。

7. and →but 她说她感到抱歉，但是可以再约时间，表转折，用but。

8. 在meeting前加the 因为明天的见面在上文已提及，第二次出现需要加定冠词the。

9. wants→wanted因事情发生在过去，谓语动词用过去式。

10. for →about 告诉某人某事，搭配为tell sb. about sth。

课堂练习

April 8

Hi Kelvin，

I am sorry to tell you that as I have something important to attend this evening， I cant go to see the movie， Monster Hunt， with you this evening. Would you mind my changing our appointment to tomorrow and another place， the Wanda Cinema？ We will meet together at 7：00 p.m. at the gate of the cinema tomorrow evening. I have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball. If this change is not convenient to you， you can inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.

Yours，

Li Hua

课外作业

March 11

Dear Alex，

I would like to ask you for help. Would you please take the place of me to take part in the tree planting activity in the Peoples Park tomorrow？ You know the school sports meeting has taken up much of my time and energy， and I need to adjust myself. You will get together at the school gate at 7 oclock， and set off by bike for the park. By the way， it is reported that it probably rains tomorrow， so do remember to take your raincoat along with you. Besides， you must bring your own lunch. A million thanks to you！

Yours，

Li Hua

责任编辑 蒋小青