My Dream
2017-03-29王永灿
王永灿
临清市金郝庄镇中心小学六年级 山东 聊城 252656
Everybody have a dream,because we’re dreamers.In our heart,there is a colorful dream.Sometimes the dream is perfect,sometimes it’s special,sometimes it’s sweet,sometimes it’s yummy.
In my dream,there are some children.I always play games with them and enjoy ourselves.There are so many candies,too.Blue candies,pink candies,orange candies,apple candies...Howdelicious!In my dream,there is a specialsky,In ourworld,the sky is blue,but the sky of my dream is pink,some angels are having fun there.In my dream,white bird can fly high,flowers can sing songs,frogs have a jump race,tomatoes are blue,potatoes are yellow,all the things are different.
In my dream,Chinese people,Korean people,Japanese people,Italian people,Spanish people,American people and Russian people are hand in hand.All the people smile for ever.It is a balanced world.
In my dream,everything is wonderful,but our world isn’t like it.So we must like my dream,to let our world get more beautiful!
辅导评语:中国梦是国家的梦、民族的梦,也是包括广大青年在内的每个中国人的梦。“得其大者可以兼其小。”只有把人生理想融入国家和民族的事业中,才能最终成就一番事业。每个年轻人都要念梦、追梦、圆梦。小作者的梦五彩缤纷,整个自然界让人看了心旷神怡,各国人民友好往来,手拉手和谐相处。如此小的年龄,作品揭示了这么深刻的主题,难能可贵,耐人寻味。