2007—2016十年高考全国卷Ⅰ书面表达范文佳句欣赏

2017-02-16山东谭凤兰吉林

教学考试(高考英语) 2017年4期

山东谭凤兰吉林张晶

山东谭凤兰吉林张晶

2016年，对于高考英语科目，除北京、上海、天津、江苏、浙江等省市继续自主命题之外，全国其他省份都使用了全国卷。假若考生今年参加高考，当然想要让自己的考场作文脱颖而出、博得阅卷老师的青睐，从而拿到一个较高的分数，那么考生在做到句子准确无误的基础之上又该怎样提高语言的表述层次呢？不妨一起梳理一下2007—2016十年高考全国卷Ⅰ书面表达范文中的佳句，并揣测一下命题人对于试题要点是如何写作的。体会这些佳句并学会运用，定会为考生的文章增添不少色彩。勿忘将其收入囊中哦！

1.“主从复合句”使句子更高级

①定语从句

例1要点：理想中笔友的条件（2007）

In my mind，she is someone who is interested in travelling，swimming，and playing table tennis.

例2要点：祝贺苏琳生日；感谢工作人员（2008）

I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work，because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

例3要点：假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委（2010）

I’m Li Hua. Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School，which is close to your university.

例4要点：假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营（2012）

I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

例5要点：请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）（2016）

However，I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used.

②宾语从句

例6要点：希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位笔友（2007）

I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend.

例7要点：一直关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”（2008）

About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin.

例8要点：叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会（2013）

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference.

例9要点：询问学费和住宿情况（2014）

I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.

③状语从句

例10要点：说明为什么选择这样的笔友（2007）

It would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.

例11要点：Tracy来电话留言尽快回电（2009）

She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.

④名词性从句

例12要点：说明为什么选择这样的笔友（2007）

With such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling，taking care of pets，or whatever we have in common.

2.“非谓语动词”使句子更简洁

①作定语

例13要点：索取苏琳三岁生日照（2008）

By the way，could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday?

例14要点：你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛，希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委（2010）

I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st.

例15要点：演讲比赛主题：人与自然；参赛选手：10名学生（2010）

Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic“Man and the Nature”.

例16要点：假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程（2011）

I’m Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.

例17要点：你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗的短文（2015）

It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.

②作状语

例18要点：Tracy来电话留言：咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消（2009）

At about 1 o’clock this afternoon，Tracy called，saying that she couldnt’ meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.

3.“现在完成时”的巧用使表达更灵活

例19要点：从小喜爱大熊猫（2008）

I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.

例20要点：替房东还书（2009）

I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.

例21要点：告诉他你叔叔带去他想要的那幅中国画（2013）

I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

例22要点：计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意（2014）

I’ve seen your ad，and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.

例23要点：假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（2016）

I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation，and I have just completed my application letter and resume.

4.“被动句”使句子更别致

例24要点：希望获准（2012）

I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

例25要点：希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助（2011）

I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.

5.“委婉语”使表达更礼貌

例26要点：询问他是否可以接机（2013）

Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.?

例27要点：给美国朋友彼得写信约稿（2015）

Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?

例28要点：请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）（2016）

I know you have a very busy schedule，but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.