话题5 校园生活（School life）

黄巍

一、命题预测

校园生活是指在校学习的课程，学校、班级或学生会等举行的各项比赛或课外活动，包括聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等课外活动；也包括学生的穿着、发型，还包括预习、复习、讨论、归纳等学习活动或教师的教学方法。

命题者可能会要求考生就某项比赛或课外活动等写一份通知，或就具体的聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等课外活动写一份通知或写活动后的日记。可能要求考生就学生的穿着、发型、行为举止等发表看法；就预习、复习、讨论、归纳等课堂学习活动和教师教学方法等发表看法；就学生对任课教师开展评教活动发表看法；学校在节假日该不该补课；学生该不该参加校外各种形式的特长训练，如钢琴培训、外语培训、勤工俭学等。

二、常用短语

1. dining hall食堂

2. dormitory宿舍

3. sign up for 报名

4. have a good command of精通于

5. pass the examination通过考试

6. voluntary labor义务劳动

7. concentrate on 全神贯注；专心于

8. the Students Union学生会

9. physical activities 体育活动

10. keep... in mind记住

11. cheat in the exam考试作弊

12. prepare for lessons预习功课

13. make progress in ... 在……方面取得进步

14. after-school/extracurricular activities课外活动

15. enhance the students awareness of sth. 提高学生的……意识

三、套用句式

1. It goes without saying that education is of great importance to children. 毫无疑问，教育对孩子来说是十分重要的。

2. The reason why he did so is that he wanted to help her.他这样做的原因是想帮助她。

3. Not only can it help us in our study， but also it can help us in our daily life. 它不仅能够帮助我们的学习，而且还能够在生活方面给我们帮助。

4. There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问我们的教育制度令人不满意。

5. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、习作修改（做短文改错，背经典范文）

Dear Ms. Smith，

Im Li Hua. Chairman of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School， which is closely to your university. Im writing to invite you to be judge at our English speech contest to hold in your school in June 1st. It would start at 2∶00 pm and keep for about three hour. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the give topic “Man and the Nature”. We hope you to accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 446765560 because you have some questions.

I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

With best wishes

Li Hua

五、课堂练习

假如你是雷雨，你在湖南老家的朋友李俊今年也是高三， 他在和你的交谈中表示现在的学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。

1. 将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助。

2. 要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信。

3. 多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Li jun，

There is no doubt that I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from ...

[过程指导]

第一步，认真审题。

1. 定文体：写一封信，是应用文体。首先要注意书信的格式，特别要注意书信的开头与结尾的常用句子。

2. 定时态：以一般现在时态为主。

3. 定人称：以第一和第二人称为主。

4. 定要点：认真阅读所给信息要点，力求信息点完整。

第二步，考虑表达。

也就是打草稿：一拟定结构，二寻找关键词，三确定要用的句式。

结构：你打算分几段写（一般是有几个要点就分几段）？段与段之间如何衔接？

关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。

第三步，连句成篇。

巧用关联词（连接，副词）。

第四步，检查核对。

漏词，错词，如查动词时态、名词复数、主谓一致等是否正确。

第五步，规范书写。

六、课外作业

叶良辰是一名即将进入高三的学生，他来向你请教如何安排高三的学习和生活，请给他提一些建议。内容包括：

1. 制定一个学习量适中的复习计划，有张有弛，不要熬夜。

2. 注意锻炼身体，加强营养。

3. 遇到问题多思考，勤总结。

4. 保持愉快的心情，和同学们搞好关系。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考答案与范文

四、习作修改

1. closely→close系动词后要跟形容词作表语。

2. 在judge前面加上不定冠词a 单数可数名词前一般要有冠词。

3. hold →be held和 speech contest是被动关系。

4. in→on具体日期前应用介词 on。

5. hour→hours数词超过一，其后的名词就应该用复数。

6. give→given应该用过去分词做定语。

7. 去掉to accept 的 to 因Hope后面不能用不定式做宾补。

8. because →if这里应该是一个虚拟条件状语从句。

9. some →any条件状语从句中应该用any。

10. hear→hearing介词后面的动词要用ing形式。

五、课堂练习

Dear Li jun，

There is no doubt that I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. In an effort to deal with your problem， I suggest you tell your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time as it only makes you more stressed out. Instead， remind yourself of the progress you have made in your study， which will surely build up your own confidence. In addition， do more exercise in your spare time. Not only can it relieve your stress， but also it will help you sleep better at night. I hope you will get out of trouble soon and live happily.

Best wishes！

Yours sincerely，

Lei Yu

六、课外作业

As a senior high student， it goes without saying that we are suffering from great pressure. In an effort to deal with it， I advise you to make a review plan which is not too hard or too easy and youd better not stay late because it makes you tired and sleepy in the day. In addition， try to spare some time to take exercise which can make you healthy and relaxed. When you meet difficult problems， you must think about them carefully first and try to draw conclusions from them so as to get a clear understanding. Whats more， everybody knows a good mood is of great importance， if you can be in a good mood and get on well with your classmates， youll find everything becomes very easy and smooth.

（作者单位：广东深圳市松岗中学）

责任编辑 蒋小青