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张　婷

学生习作(张婷 湖北省)：

Sunny Saturday 2007, Oct. 3rd1

It is2 sunny and hot. I went to a beautiful place—Great Wall3 with my friends. We went there at 10:00 by a bus4. We had great fun playing on it. In the afternoon we comed5 back with happy heart(心情).

分析：本篇是以日记的形式记录了有趣的假期，语言简洁，条理清晰，值得学习，但仍有几处错误，请注意：

1. 英语日记中日期和天气情况的位置和汉语不同。英语一般在左边写月，日，年和星期，用形容词把天气情况写在右边。

2. 英语中通常是记叙当天发生过的事情，因此所用的时态一般是过去时。

3. “长城”为专有名词，在表达时前面要加the。

4. by+交通工具，其中交通工具前不加冠词。

5. 此处错误在于come的过去式没有掌握。come属于不规则变化，其过去式是 came。

Oct. 3rd, 2007, Saturday Sunny

It was sunny and hot, I went to a beautiful place—the Great Wall with my friends. We went there at 10:00 by bus. We had great fun playing on it. In the afternoon we came back with happy heart.

（指导老师：许淑芬）