话题表达指导 Writing

话题介绍

话题：自我提升。要求学生在读了一本书或是一篇文章后，能讲述故事的情节并发表自己对故事的看法及从中得到的启示，写一篇读后感。

建议体裁：夹叙夹议（读后感）

注意事项：

1. 重组材料，确定要点。写作前要进行立意、构思和选材，对提供的材料再加工，确定写作的顺序、要点和重点，拟定使用的词组和句型。

2. 结构完整，前后呼应。主题和内容一致，结尾与开头呼应。

题例导学

题目

读下面的故事，根据你对故事的理解，写一篇读后感。

1，009 Rejections

Once there was an old man， who was broke， living in a tiny house and owned a beat-up car. Hewas living off $105 Social Security checks. At 65， he decided that things had to change. So hethought about what he had to offer. His friends talked about his chicken recipe. He decided that thiswas his best shot at making a change.

He left Kentucky and traveled to different states to try to sell his recipe. He offered the recipeto them for free， just asking for a small percentage for the items sold. Sounds like a good deal，right？ Unfortunately， not to most of the restaurants.

He heard “NO” over 1，000 times. Even after all of those rejections， he didn’t give up. Hebelieved his chicken recipe was something special. He got rejected 1，009 times before he heard hisfirst “YES”.

With that one success， Colonel Harland Sanders changed the way Americans eat chicken.Kentucky Fried Chicken， popularly known as KFC， was born.

思路引导

写作时，应先概括故事内容，然后论述自己对这个故事的思考或从中得到的启示。同学们可以先思考以下几个问题：

1. Colonel面临着什么样的困难？

2. 他打算怎么做？

3. 过程怎么样？

4. 结果是什么？

5. 获得这样的结果的关键是什么？

6. 通过这个故事，你学到了什么？

7. 当你遇到困难时，应该怎么做？

将上述问题的答案串联起来，必要时加上适当的过渡衔接，即可完成该篇读后感的写作。

范例展示

The story tells us how the founder of KFC made his chicken recipe accepted. At 65， Colonelwas not content with relying on the Social Security checks to live his life. Motivated by his friends，he decided to sell his chicken recipe. He was rejected constantly， but he didn’t throw in the towel.Instead， he kept trying. Finally， his efforts paid off.

It was his never-give-up spirit that made KFC popular around the world. Likewise， in life， nomatter how terrible the situation is， we shouldn’t give up hope easily. As teenage students， in theprocess of growth， we will meet with some challenges. So long as we face them bravely and takemeasures to improve ourselves， we will surely succeed in solving them and become the person whowe wish to be. Never give up and always believe in yourself in spite of difficulties and challenges.

话题表达

读下面的故事，根据你对故事的理解，写一篇读后感。

The Donkey（驴）

One day a farmer’s donkey fell down into a well. The animal cried for hours as the farmer triedto figure out what to do. Finally he thought the animal was old， and the well needed to be coveredup anyway; it just wasn’t worth it to get back the donkey.

He invited all his neighbors to come over and help him. They all began to shovel （铲起） dirtinto the well. At first， the donkey realized what was happening and cried horribly. Then， toeveryone’s amazement， he quieted down. A few shovels of dirt later， the farmer finally looked downthe well， and was astonished at what he saw. With every shovel of dirt that hit his back， the donkeywould shake it off and take a step up.

As the farmer’s neighbors continued to shovel dirt on top of the animal， he would shake it offand take a step up. Pretty soon， everyone was amazed as the donkey stepped up over the edge of thewell and ran away！