旅行计划写作

2023-10-05张静

疯狂英语·新阅版 2023年8期

张静

文體概述

旅行计划是旅行者在出发之前根据个人的时间、兴趣、目的等情况所制订的切实可行的计划。我们可以根据旅游时间安排介绍具体的旅行路线。制订计划时，我们应考虑到天气、交通、旅游设施等方面的实际状况，尽可能地合理安排。因为计划是指将来要做的事情，故这样的文章在时态上以一般现在时、现在进行时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。因为旅行计划的主要内容是旅游活动，所以我们需要将这一部分作为重点来写。

Step 1 文章结构

Step 2 经典模板

Dear________ ，

Glad to receive your email！ Now let me introduce our travel plan.

In order to know more about________________________（旅游目的）， we are planning to visit________________________（旅游目的地）.

On the first day， we are going to tour________________________（旅游活动一和有名的景点）. On the second day， we are touring________________________ （旅游活动二和有名的景点）. We will check in________________________（住宿酒店）. During the period，we can take________________________ （交通方式）.

I wish you________________________（表达愿望）.

Yours sincerely/truly，____________（落款）

Step 3 语言组织

一、开头语常用表达

1. I’m planning to travel to Chengdu， a famous city in China.

2. With my winter holiday coming， I have a plan for it.

3. As National Day is coming， my family are planning to...

4. My travel plan is as follows.

5. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the trip.

二、主体部分常用表达

1. Known for its various cultural heritage， the city attracts tourists around the world.

2. When we get there， we will first find a hotel to check in.

3. We’ll visit the temple on the first day， where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts.

4. We can pay a visit to the national park by bus because it’s far away from the center of the city.

5. What is more exciting is that we will make our own DIY products there.

6. You can enjoy delicious local food such as jiaozi and smoked tofu.

三、结束语常用表达

1. It is such a wonderful place that I can’t wait to visit it with you.

2. Would you like to join me？

3. Looking forward to hearing from you.

4. Do you have any advice？

情境呈现

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike假期想来中国旅游，向你咨询相关旅行计划，请你用英语给他写一封信。内容包括：

1. 时间；

2. 活动；

3. 你的建议。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike，

I’m glad that you are coming to China for your coming vacation.________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours，Li Hua

【佳作赏析】

Dear Mike，

I’m glad that you are coming to China for your coming vacation. I have a travel planfor you.

I think the best time to experience Chinese customs is the Spring Festival， which fallson the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar every year， so you can arrange yourtrip in January. If you want to know how we celebrate the Spring Festival， I advise you tolive with a local family in Beijing hutong. And you can’t miss Peking Opera， which is animportant part of Chinese culture. Apart from Chinese culture， there are many places of interest in Beijing and you will find it worthwhile to visit them， such as the Palace Museum，the Summer Palace and the Great Wall.

In addition， I advise you to invite a friend who can speak Chinese fluently to travelwith you. Hope you’ll have a good time in Beijing.

Best wishes.

Yours，Li Hua

即时训练

假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom近期计划去杭州游玩并邀请你一同前往。请根据下列要点给他写一封电子邮件。

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 接受邀请；

3. 行程安排。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom，