无人理睬的女孩

广东 程志丽

小女孩Cindy在校没有朋友，一次偶然的机会，“我”保护了她，她向“我”询问她交不到朋友的原因，“我”该如实相告吗？Cindy的生活会有变化吗？

1Last year there was a girl at our school who hardly talked to anyone. I think it was because she seldom showered, and she smelled kind of bad. Her name was Cindy Lindburg. I didn't know exactly where she lived,but it must have been somewhere in the neighborhood because we always got on the school bus at the same bus stop.

2Cindy Lindburg didn't have many friends.She always came to the lunch room alone and left alone. On the bus, no one offered her a seat, and she never asked if she could share a seat with others. I thought that maybe it was because she was sort of a shy person. She seemed like a nice girl, who had an odor (气味)problem.

3One day,I was walking up to the bus stop and I saw Carl Littleton making fun of her.I couldn't hear what he was saying, but I saw him laughing and rolling his eyes in his typical poking-fun-at-you way.I also saw how sad it made Cindy.Holding her notebook tightly to her chest like a shield,she stared at the ground and moved as far away from him as possible without leaving the bus stop entirely.As soon as I got close enough,I glared at Carl to make him stop laughing—even though I knew he probably wouldn't.He didn't,so I walked over and stood closer to Cindy so she wouldn't feel quite so bad. It was just one of those times when you just knew someone needed someone to be a friend.

4I didn't think she'd say anything, but she did. Her eyes peeked (偷看) up from staring at the ground and as though she thought I'd be embarrassed if anyone heard her speaking to me,she whispered“Hi”.

5“Hi,”I said. Then as loudly as I could, I said,“Don't pay any attention to Carl. His parents have been unsuccessful in teaching him some manners.”

6Some of the kids standing there laughed. The comment didn't even rouse（唤醒）a smile out of Cindy.By now everyone there was talking with a friend.Quietly,and with a serious look on her face,Cindy said,“Why don't I have any friends?”

Reading Check

阅读上面的短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph 1:

Her question took me by surprise.____________________________________________

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Paragraph 2:

I was a little bit relieved since she seemed to take this well.________________________

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写作导引

一、语篇研读

（一）基本要素

Where When●1._________●One day 2._________●Cindy Lindburg,a shy and nice girl with an 3. _________problem and no one talked to her Who ●I,at 4. _________school with Cindy,who knew Cindy had no friends at school What●Carl Littleton,a boy making fun of Cindy●I saw Carl making fun of Cindy and Cindy felt 5. _________. So I stood closer to Cindy to make her feel not so 6. _________.Then she asked 7. _________she had no friends.Why●I helped Cindy probably because it was a good virtue to help people in need, especially people we knew.As for Cindy asking why she had no friends,it was probably because she felt 8. _________and was eager to make friends, especially when she was__________9. _________.

（二）主题探索

What is the text about?And what does the author want to tell us?

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二、语言学习

（一）词块

__________________________________________________________________Expressions 1.kind of___________________________________________________________________________2.share sth with sb___________________________________________________________________3.make fun of_________________________________________________________________________4.roll one's eyes_____________________________________________________________________5.poke fun at 6.hold sth tightly to the chest like a shield_________________________________________________7.glare at/stare at____________________________________________________________________8.peek up__________________________________________________________________________9.pay attention to____________________________________________________________________10.be unsuccessful in doing sth_________________________________________________________Chinese meanings__________

（二）句式

1.定语从句

Last year there was a girl at our school who hardly talked to anyone.(Para.1)

She seemed like a nice girl,who had an odor problem.(Para.2)

It was just one of those times when you just knew someone needed someone to be a friend.(Para.3)

2.宾语从句

I think (that) it was because she seldom showered, and she smelled kind of bad.(Para.1)

I didn't know exactly where she lived.(Para.1)

She never asked if she could share a seat with others.(Para.2)

I couldn't hear what he was saying.(Para.3)

3.表语从句

I think(that)it was because she seldom showered,and she smelled kind of bad.(Para.1)I thought that maybe it was because she was sort of a shy person.(Para.2)

4.状语从句

As soon as I got close enough, I glared at Carl to make him stop laughing—even though I knew he probably wouldn't.(Para.3)

He didn't,so I walked over and stood closer to Cindy so she wouldn't feel quite so bad.(Para.3)

Her eyes peeked up from staring at the ground and as though she thought I'd be embarrassed if anyone heard her speaking to me,she whispered“Hi”.(Para.4)

5.非谓语作状语

Holding her notebook tightly to her chest like a shield,she stared at the ground.(Para.3)

（三）即学即用

1.我拜访了写了许多有关中国的书的作家。（使用定语从句）

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2.她得知这个孩子已经两天没有吃饭了。（使用宾语从句）

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3.她告诉他，她坚信他可以在舞台上表演，因为她看过他在新年为家人表演短剧。（使用状语从句）

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4.他的父亲不赞成这个计划，担心这会影响他的成绩。(使用非谓语作状语)

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三、续写技能

（一）表达“惊讶”的短语

感到惊讶的惊讶地表示惊讶的神态、肢体动作be/feel astonished/amazed/surprised/shocked/stunned/startled/open-mouthed/wide-________________eyed/thunderstruck 感到惊讶的1.in/with astonishment/surprise/shock/amazement 惊讶地2.be thrown into astonishment 大吃一惊3.to one's amazement/surprise/astonishment 令某人吃惊的是4.come as a bolt from the blue/be a bolt out of the blue 晴天霹雳________________5.be shocked beyon_________________________________________________d_words_惊讶得说不出话来1.gasp in astonishment 惊讶得倒吸一口气2.blink in surprise 惊讶地眨眼3.sb's eyes widen/grow wide 某人惊讶地瞪大眼睛4.sb's jaw drops/falls 某人目瞪口呆5.give a cry of surprise 吃惊地喊出来6.gape at 张口结舌地看7.freeze/stand still/be numb with shock 惊呆了________________8.raise t__________________________________________________________he_eyebrows_扬起眉毛

（二）表达“惊讶”的句子

方法一：增加细节描写，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。

1. 听到这个意外的消息，她呆住了，动弹不得。（动作描写，非谓语作状语）

Hearing the unexpected news,she froze with shock,as if rooted to the spot.

2.他直起身，目瞪口呆地看着我。（神态描写，连续的动作，情绪形容词作状语）

He straightened up and looked at me,open-mouthed.

方法二：使用修辞手法。

3.当乔希听到富兰克林想要的东西时，他的嘴张得足以吞下一个牙医。（夸张）

When Josh heard what Franklin wanted, his mouth opened wide enough to swallow a dentist.

4.两个月后，我们偶然听到老汤姆去世的消息，这犹如晴天霹雳。（夸张）

Two months later,we overheard that old Tom had died,which came as a bolt from the blue.

四、续写布局

文章最后一段写到，“我”对Cindy 的安慰并没能让她产生一丝笑意，看到周围的人都在和朋友聊天，她神情严肃地问“我”为什么她没有朋友。

根据续写第一段的段首句“她的问题让我很惊讶。”，结合续写第二段的段首句“她似乎能很好地接受，我稍微松了口气。”，可以推测续写第一段主要讲述“我”虽然感到惊讶和为难，但最终“我”告诉了Cindy 她没有朋友的原因并且她接受了这个原因。结合原文内容，“我”认为Cindy 是一个害羞、善良、有体味问题的女孩，而告诉一个善良、害羞的女孩她有体味并不容易，这也是“我”在听到Cindy 的问题时感到惊讶的原因。具体情节发展，可根据以下问题链展开：

1.What did I do?

2.How did Cindy react?

3.Did she accept the reason?

续写第二段的段首句“她似乎能很好地接受，我稍微松了口气。”遵循了正能量结局的原则。Cindy 最后交到了朋友，“我”也为自己能为Cindy 的生活带来好的转变而开心。因此可以推测，续写第二段主要围绕Cindy 听从“我”的建议并做出了改变，最终交到朋友而展开。具体情节发展，可根据以下问题链展开：

1.What did I suggest?

2.How did Cindy feel?

3.What did Cindy do?

4.How did I feel for making a better change for Cindy?