话题作文解析
2022-12-11杨庆春
杨庆春
一、话题分析
本期以“运动”为主线,主要内容是谈论运动的好处和你最喜欢的运动。写作内容要谈论运动的重要性,在写作过程中要明确以下几点:
1.写出你最喜欢的运动;
2.说说你喜欢这项运动的原因,至少阐述三个原因;
3.结合话题内容,在写作过程中要大量运用课文中学过的有关运动的短语。写作时,以第一人称为主,并学会使用一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时来表达。
二、经典例题
“运动兴,民族兴。”全民运动在中国蔚然兴起。假如你是一名九年级学生,你们学校的英语社团正在举办题为“Sports”的征文比赛。请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参赛。
1.要点:
2.要求:
(1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等;
(2)语言要通顺,表达要准确;
(3)要求包含所有要点提示,为了行文需要,可适当拓展和增加要点;
(4)词数不少于60个英语单词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 正文:
As we know, sport plays an important part in our life.
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三、思路导引
四、素材准备
词汇
plays an important part in在……中起著重要的作用
be interested in对……感兴趣
of all the sports在所有的运动中
a healthy and popular sport一项健康而流行的运动
when I was only 5 years old在我只有 5 岁的时候
a little nervous一点紧张
with the help of在……的帮助下
more and more 越来越多
have a good time 玩得很开心
句子
1. I enjoy sports very much. They help me to keep healthy and study better.
我非常喜欢运动。运动帮助我保持健康并更好地学习。
2. I find its a good way to relax myself.我觉得这是放松自己的好方法。
3. I have benefited a lot from doing exercise!运动让我受益匪浅!
4. Doing sports gives me energy.做运动给我能量。
5. Sports can keep me active and strong.运动可以让我保持活跃和强壮。
6. I learn to get on well with others after playing basketball with my classmates.
和同学打篮球后,我学会了与人相处融洽。
五、佳作展示
As we know, sport plays an important part in our life. I am interested in sports and I do sports every day. Of all the sports, I like swimming most. It is a healthy and popular sport. Swimming in the water is cool as well as exciting. Besides, swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment.
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old. Although I was a little nervous in the water at first, with the help of my parents and coach, I did a good job after several weeks. Now, I am very good at swimming. I go swimming once a week. Of course, I like watching this sport. My favorite swimmer is Fu Yuanhui. She always drives me crazy every time she appears on TV.
I believe there will be more and more people love swimming. So everybody can have a good time when going swimming.
六、教师点评
本文作者能够按照说明文的写作特点,采用“三段式”的方法描述他最喜欢的运动——游泳,以及游泳对健康带来的益处,还有给自己带来的快感。段落清晰、层次分明、一目了然。
第一段:开门见山,提出运动的重要性,同时指出自己最喜爱的一项运动——游泳,并说明游泳能给人们带来身心健康。
第二段: 详细描述学习游泳的时间,以及开始时在水中的紧张,后来在父母及教练的帮助下,经过几周的训练,终于水到渠成,游刃有余。同时,也表达对游泳明星的崇拜。
第三段: 总结全篇,画龙点睛。作者相信会有越来越多的人喜欢游泳,并且从中获得乐趣。