话题写作之“描述地点”
2021-08-14齐鹏
齐鹏
【写作话题】
本单元围绕“The Neighborhood”话题,让学生学会描述各种街区设施、建筑物、地理位置,同时能够正确描述到达某一地点的路线。在写作中要正确使用相关的方位介词,问路指路的句型。命题方式有看图作文,提示性作文等。
【写作素材】
Places
post office, police station, hotel, restaurant, bank, hospital, street, pay phone, park, town,neighborhood
Positions
near, across from, in front of, behind, north, on the right, on the left, crossing, around
Structures
A: Excuse me. Is there a hospital near here?
B: Yes, there is. Its on Bridge Street.
A: Is there a restaurant near the hotel?
B: Yes. Go along New Street. Turn right at the first crossing and the restaurant is on your left, across from the pay phone.
【实践写作】
假如你叫Mike,你的朋友Lucy明天要到你所在的城市,但是你没有时间去机场接他。请给她发一封电子邮件,告诉她怎样从机场到你家。要求包括下面的要点,不少于60词。
提示:1. 先乘出租车从机场到和平路;
2. 沿着和平路走,经过一家超市后向右拐;
3. 穿过第八大街,当看到一个邮局时,向右拐。这时你能看见一座红色的房子,那就是我的家。
【思路点拨】
1. 首先说明“你没有时间去机场接Lucy”,并引起下文,告诉她“从机场到你家”的路线;
2. 本文重点是写三个要点提示的内容,可单独一段;
3. 使用first,then等词语,使行文条理清晰;
4. 注意正确使用go along, turn right等指路的英语表达方式。
【例文赏析】
Dear Lucy,
Im very sorry to tell you that I cant pick you up tomorrow, because I have to go to my office, but let me tell you how to get to my home.
First, you can take a taxi at the airport to Heping Road. Then go along Heping Road, turn right when you pass a supermarket. Go through the Eighth Street and youll see a post office. Just turn right there, a red house will be in front of you. Thats my house and my parents will meet you there.
Good luck!
Yours,
Mike
【小練笔】
假如你叫Lisa,下周末Mary要到你家去玩,但她不知道去你家的路。请你根据内容要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下去你家的路。
要求:1. 注意正确使用本单元的短语和句型书写本文;2. 叙述方位时要条理清楚,60词左右。
提示词:walk along, turn left, at the second crossing, across from, restaurant, bank