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2020-06-06安徽泗县一中吴安运

疯狂英语·新读写 2020年3期
关键词:分词定语状语

安徽泗县一中 吴安运

◎文体概述

“文娱与体育”话题涉及电影和戏剧、音乐和舞蹈、电视节目、体育锻炼、文体竞赛、观众与粉丝等。

高考可能会从以下角度命题:

1. 介绍某个文娱活动、某个体育运动项目或赛事、某个影视节目等;

2. 对某一部电影或电视剧进行评价;

3. 介绍某个体育项目的起源、发展等情况;

4. 对国际赛事(如奥运会、残奥会、田径锦标赛、游泳锦标赛等)进行报道;

5. 写信申请成为某赛事的志愿者。

高考可能会要求考生对以下话题发表看法:

1. 体育锻炼对健康的好处;

2. 音乐对人的成长的作用;

3. 明星的偶像作用;

4. 明星的不良行为对粉丝产生的不良影响;

5. 怎样做文明观众。

◎写作模板

Recently I have had a discussion about the ways for students to relax with Terry, a student from Class One, Grade Two. In his opinion,the best ways________. He also believes that________.

However, I'm not quite agreeable. In my opinion,________.I think________. I often________. Besides, I think________.I think________.

→提出话题

→阐述看法

→提出不同看法

→叙述理由

模板范文

Recently I have had a discussion about the ways for students to relax with Terry, a student from Class One, Grade Two. In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isn't a bad way.

However, I'm not quite agreeable. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy. I often play ping-pong after class and I find it really helpful for both my health and my study. Besides, I think chatting with friends isn't a bad way. I think it can help me get on better with my friends.

◎经典句型

To live a happier life, we must keep a balance between work and entertainment. 为了生活更幸福,我们必须平衡工作和娱乐的关系。

Different students have different ways to relax. 不同的学生有不同的放松方式。

Sports can also let brains have a good rest so that our study will be more effective. 体育运动也可以使大脑得到更好的休息,使我们的学习更有效果。

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。

It is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. 对我来说, 这是一个自我放松的好机会,可以使我更高效地学习。

Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. 参加这场比赛,对我来说,是一个展示我的舞蹈才能和为班级做贡献的绝佳机会。

As we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure, we should choose proper ways to relax. 因为我们每天学习的时间太长,遭受太大压力,所以我们应该选择合适的方式放松。

You shouldn't place so much importance on winning. There is a saying that “It is not winning, but taking part that counts.” 你不应该如此看重输赢。 有谚语说:“重在参与,不在输赢。 ”

◎典例链接

假定你是李华,你市图书馆将播放关于中国茶文化的纪录片。 你的外教Mr Smith是中国茶文化爱好者,请你给他写一封邮件,邀请他一起观看。 内容包括:

1. 纪录片主要内容;

2. 播放时间、地点;

3. 中文发音,英文字幕。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 纪录片documentary 字幕

subtitle

Dear Mr Smith,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【试题解读】

1. 审题立意

该篇书面表达采用的是应用文的考查形式, 该写作任务要求考生根据提示写一封邀请信。

从测试内容上来看,题目要求考生邀请外教Mr Smith一起观看关于中国茶文化的纪录片。中国茶文化内容丰富,在全世界享有盛誉,是中国传统文化的一种。中国茶文化与考生的日常生活息息相关,他们对中国茶文化应有一定的了解。

从提示上来看,写作任务所列出的三个写作要点既有具体的说明,也有较为概括性的说明,故有一定的开放性,这有利于学生自主发挥。考生应认真理清写作要求,明确写作目的,精心设计写作结构,细化写作内容,选择好的素材为主题服务。 写作时应注意写作的要点,明确哪些部分需要详细说明。 因为这是书信,故需要用第一人称展开写作。写作中应体现对中国茶文化的深厚理解,这样既可表达考生的家国情怀,又能增强文章的说服力。

2. 写作要点

⑴信件开头说明写作目的。

⑵提出邀请观看中国茶文化的纪录片。

⑶说明纪录片的播放时间和地点。

⑷纪录片的内容。

(5)纪录片用汉语,配有英文字幕。

(6)再次表达希望对方来观看纪录片的愿望。

3. 注意事项

⑴邀请信开头应开门见山,直接发出邀请。

⑵纪录片所涉及的中国茶文化的内容应

详细说明。

【佳作赏析1】

Dear Mr Smith,

Since the broadcasting of a documentary concerning Chinese tea culture is around the corner①, I sincerely invite you to appreciate it with me.

Scheduled to be shown at 9:00 am this Saturday ②, the documentary is designed and presented by the City Library whose content covers the origin of tea and a variety of Chinese tea existing in different areas③. In addition④,the process of producing and making tea will also be included. We may also taste some Chinese famous tea during the course of the activity. ⑤The documentary is in Chinese with English subtitles which will assist you in understanding.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

亮点分析:

本篇习作按照写作要求邀请Mr Smith前来观看关于中国茶文化的纪录片, 写作目的明确,写作要点覆盖全面,表达流畅,句式富于变化。分词作状语和定语从句的使用都说明了作者驾驭英语语言的能力。 另外,作者对纪录片内容的介绍翔实,使用了被动句式。 分词作状语、主从复合句的正确运用都说明作者有很好的英语学科素养。

①since引导原因状语从句,该结构在文章开头使用无疑让读者眼前一亮。

②这是一个过去分词短语,在句中充当状语, 该状语明确地表达出了纪录片的播放时间,有助于简化语言。

③这是一个由whose引导的定语从句,该定语从句介绍了纪录片的内容,涉及茶的来源及各种茶品,其中existing为现在分词短语修饰前面的Chinese tea, 作其定语,cover表示 “包括”,这些都突显了作者丰富的词汇知识。

④过渡词in addition进一步说明纪录片的内容,衔接自然,表达流畅。

⑤作者补充说明了活动的内容,增加了活动的吸引力。

【佳作赏析2】

Dear Mr Smith,

Knowing that you're enthusiastic about Chinese tea, I'm writing to invite you to enjoy a documentary concerning Chinese tea culture.①

Composed of three parts, the documentary will introduce the origin of tea, the wide variety of Chinese tea as well as some suggestions on making tea appropriately. ②Besides, by watching the documentary, you will have a good knowledge of benefits drinking tea can bring.③The documentary is in Chinese with English subtitles. Therefore, you'll have no difficulty understanding what will be presented.④

The documentary will be shown at 2:30 pm this Saturday, lasting two hours in the City Library. ⑤I sincerely hope that you can come and appreciate the documentary with me.⑥Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

亮点分析:

本篇习作在文章开头明确了写作目的,接着详细介绍了纪录片的内容,最后再次表达了对对方来观看纪录片的希望, 全文结构严谨,脉络清晰,语言流畅。作者用词十分考究,一些短语运用十分出彩,如be enthusiastic about、be composed of、 the wide variety of、have a good knowledge of、 have no difficulty (in) doing等。文章运用了多个复杂结构, 如主从复合句、分词作状语等。

①文章首句直接提出邀请, 简洁明了。knowing that ...是现在分词短语作状语,其中be enthusiastic about和be interested in同义, 但前者表达效果更好。

②composed of为过去分词短语作状语。the wide variety of和many kinds of同义,显然前者高级得多,同时句中过渡词as well as的使用使得语言十分流畅。该句话说明了纪录片的内容,所含信息量较大。

③have a good knowledge of表示 “十分了解、精通”,使用恰当。 drinking tea can bring是一个定语从句,修饰benefits。

【小贴士】表示“十分了解、精通”的结构还有:have a good grasp of、 have a good command of、have a good understanding of。

④该句用therefore过渡, 衔接自然, 句中have no difficulty understanding表示“理解没有问题”,what则引导一个宾语从句。

⑤该句用了被动语态, 现在分词短语lasting two hours充当状语。

⑥文章最后进一步表达了作者希望对方能来观看纪录片,突出了写信目的。

◎小试牛刀

当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影, 有人则喜欢读原著。 请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列

要点写一篇英语短文:

1. 看电影——省时、有趣;

2. 读原著——细节更多、语言优美;

3. 我的看法及理由。

注意:

1. 词数120左右;

2. 文章题目和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

参考词汇: 原著original work/book in the original

Film or book, which do you prefer?

Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.

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