书面表达添亮点攻略（一）词汇升级

吴永华

1.从初级词汇升级到高级词汇。一般而言，书面化的、更规范、更文雅的语言就是更高级的语言。在我们的学习过程中，高级词汇是随着学习的深入而较晚接触到的。如：

clever bright brilliant/intelligent

womed concemed

important vital/significant

necessary essential

difficult challenging

thankful grateful

very extremely

surely undoubtedly/definitely

so therefore/consequently

about conceming

enjoy appreciate

finish complete/accomplish

Ithink personally

in a word generally speaking

allkinds of various/a variety of/varieties of

begoodfor bebeneficialto beofbenefitto

be bad for be harmfulto/do harm to

very glad/happy more than delighted/pleased

lots of alarge quantity of/large quantities of

because of thanks to/owing to/due to on accountof

2.由单词升级到短语。如：

many a great many/a great number of

much a great amount/dealof

actually

as a matteroffact

veryimportant ofvitalimportance/ofgreatsignif-icance

impossible

out ofthe question

for

in favour of

firstly

to begin with/first and foremost/in the firstplace

besides

in addition/apart from this

so as a result/in consequence

I think

as far as I am concerned/from my point ofview

value

attach greatimportance to

use make use of/take advantage of

contribute make a contribution/make contribu-tions

influence/affect

havean effect/influence on

conclude

draw a conclusion

consider take...intoconsideration/account

know

acquire a good knowledge of

help do sb.afavour

adapt to

get accustomedto

should be supposed to ...

3.利用英语构词法灵活用词和造词。如 ：

broad broaden

strong strengthen

rich enrich

beautiful beautify

ideal idealize

popular popularize

warm - hearted ill- tempered/short - sighted/old -fa shioned/absent-minded/blue-eyed/white-haired

energy-saving money-wastingtime-consuming

make progress in study

makeprogress academically

rapid development in economyand politics rapid developmenteconomically and politically

inaddition additionally

4.謂语动词的升级主要利用复杂时态、被动语态、主谓一致、情态动词和虚拟语气等手段，其中一些富含语法考点和语法技巧的方法是亮点。如：

（1）时态语态 ：This is/was thefirst time that sb. have/has/haddone...， sb. was/were doing...when...， sb. was/were aboutto do... when...等。

（2）主謂一致：as well as，together with，ratherthan/other than等。

（3）情态动词和虚拟语气：It's time that sb. did/should do....I suggest that you（should） do...，I wouldhighly appreciate it if you could do...等。

5.非谓语动词的升级要用非谓语动词的各种句法功能，特别是非谓语动词作定语、状语和补语。如：

（1）非谓语动词作定语：

I can't take part in the party to be held at yourhome.

The teacher giving the lectures has an abundantknowledge of...

1 will review the vocabulary requiredin advance.

（2）非谓语动词作状语：

Knowing that...，I am willing to...

Occupied with study，I can' t...

Weather permitting，1 will...

（3）非谓语动词作补语：have one's horizonbroadened， make sb. do/done ，with time going bY

作文全文的词汇升级以2016年高考全国卷一为例。

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

原习作：Dear Ms Jenkins，

I'm writing to ask for yourhelp.Atpresent，l'mapplyingfora part -time job in a foreign tradecompany.I think it'll be ratherdifficult for me. Moreover，bydoing the part-time job Icansurely get lots of'good experienceso that I can better adapt to thedevelopment and changes ofsociety.

I've already written the application and resume.But I'm afraid that there are still some mistakes aboutthe words and format. So I have no choice but to botheryou to correct my mistakesin the materiallattach to theletter. I' d be thankful ifyou could help me.Yours ， Li Hua

词汇升级增亮后如下：Dear Ms Jenkins ，

I'm writing to seek for your help. For the timebeing ，I'm applying for a part-time job in an overseas -funded corporation. Personally，it'll be a challenge tome. Additionally，by doing the part-time job I amundoubtedly able to obtain a great deal of practical andbeneficial experience，so that I can better getaccustomed to the development and changes of society.

I've written the application and resume in advance.But I'm afraid that there are still a number of mistakesconcerning the words and format. So I have no choice butto bother you to correct my mistakes in the material Iattach to the letter. I'd appreciate it if you could do mea favor.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua