The unf orgettable trip

黑龙江省五大连池龙镇农场学校九（1）班 于淼岩

During this summer vacation，my family and I went to Beijing.Beijing is so beautiful.We visited a lot of interesting places in it.

First，we came to the Palace Museum by subway.It was really crowded there.The guide told us that the Palace Museum had a long history.It's really very big and beautiful.If you want to know more about the Palace Museum，you can go to Beijing to have a look.

Then we went to the Great Wall.It's one of the greatest eight wonders in the world.It's the pride of Chinese.It was built in the Ming Dynasty.One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.If you have the chance，you can come to the Great Wall.

Finally，we went to visit the Bird's Nest，the Water Cube （水立方）and Temple of Heaven.I was really happy that day.

Five days later，we returned to our city.I decide to go to Beijing University in the future because it's my dream.So I must study hard from now on！

【教师点评】

本文是一篇刚刚进入九年级的学生写的作文。

小作者按时间顺序写出了自己在北京期间参观的名胜，也写出了自己的观后感。全文主题突出、层次清晰、行文流畅。文章结尾也表达了作者的美好愿望！