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如何用英语表达个人观点

2018-11-29河南濮阳县第三中学刘世民

疯狂英语·新悦读 2018年8期
关键词:谋篇行文范文

河南濮阳县第三中学 刘世民

任务呈现

随着电脑在教学中的广泛应用,有人认为教师将会被电脑取代。你同意这一观点吗?请你写一篇英语短文发表你的看法并给出理由,然后给校英文报投稿。

注意:1.词数100左右(开头已给出,但不计入总数);

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

With the wide use of computers in teaching,___

写作指导

一、审题与定调

本写作要求针对某一观点发表自己的看法,属于议论文。表达自己的看法时,要观点鲜明,不能模棱两可。展开论述要注意理由客观、充分,条理清楚。时态以一般现在时为主。

二、谋篇与布局

本写作可分为三部分:

第一部分:提出议题(教师将会被电脑取代这一观点);

第二部分:表达自己的看法(同意/不同意这一观点)并阐述理由;

第三部分:总结自己的看法。

三、布局与行文【范文对比】普通范文

With the wide use of computers in teaching,①some people think that teachers will be replaced by computers.

②I don't agree_ with_ this_ i__dea.To start with,when students realise that they are being taught by a human being instead of a machine,they learn how to behave politely and respect others, ③which helps them to develop their social skills.Besides,④teachers get to know every student and can therefore help them solve their problems by explaining them in different ways and giving suitable exercises.⑤But a computer can't do this.

⑥In conclusion,the role of teachers will continue to be very important in the future.高级范文

With the wide use of computers in teaching,①some people hold the opinion that teachers will be replaced by computers.

②I strongly_ disapprove_ of this_ id__ea.To start with,when students realise that they are being taught by a human being instead of a machine,they learn how to behave politely and respect others,③which plays an important role in developing their social skills.Besides, ④aware_ of every_ student's strengths and weaknesses,teachers can guide them by giving detailed explanations and suitable exercises.⑤This is what a computer can't do.

⑥In a nutshell, the role of teachers will continue to be very important in the future.

类文跟进

假定你是李华。最近China Daily就“如何看待中国传统文化”面向社会征稿。请你用英语给编辑写一封信,谈谈你自己的想法。

内容包括:

1.表明自己的立场(传统文化应该得到保护和传承);

2.给出你的理由;

3.呼吁社会共同参与。

【规范写作】

Dear editor,

Yours,

Li Hua

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