My hometown

安徽省宣城市第八中学九年级（1）班 杨静文

Ilive in Xuan cheng,AnhuiProvince.In the past ten years,I have seen much developmentherewith my own eyes.

Firstly,many high buildingshave been built on both sides of the road and public transportation has been improved greatly.Now people can travel more conveniently,so a great number of visitors come here every year.

Besides,there are a lot of delicious and special food in my city which attracted thousands of tourists around the world.Some typical ones are ningguowalnuts and shuidongjujube.

What’s more,the most famous thing for my hometown is xuan paper,which is well-known for its high quality,so my hometown is often called the home of wenfangsibao.Lots of people who like writing often come here to enjoy the art of making paper and buy some.

This is my hometown.I believe it’ll become more and more beautiful in the future.

【教师点评】

这是一篇介绍自己家乡的习作。从整体来看，全文层次清晰，用词准确，语句通顺。细读文章后，会对宣城的现状、美食以及宣纸等有所了解。关联词语及复合句、被动语态的使用，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。但如能在结尾段加上表示欢迎内容的句子，则文章定会更加完美。