“五要”居心中 写作很轻松

湖北 陈裕明

总有学生说,英语的书面表达很难,得高分是一种奢望。事实果真如此吗？

其实,只要我们掌握了写作的关键步骤，想要在书面表达上取得高分还是能做到的!下面结合齐齐哈尔市的英语中考题，对写作的“五要”进行解读。

在学习或生活中，父母的关爱、老师的付出、朋友的帮助成就了今天的你，让你走出困境走向成功。此时此刻你一定有很多感谢的话想对他们说。请根据以下提示用英文写一篇短文。

提示：1.感谢对象：父母、老师、朋友……(可选一个或多个对象来写)。2.感谢的原因：生活方面、学习方面……3.美好祝福。

要求：词数：80～100；内容可适当发挥。

一、要认真审题

须在文章开头就直接点题，写出“生活中、学习中，……有很多感谢的话要说”这一内容，说明感恩的内容、原因,以及对象等。如：

In my life,I get lots of help and love from many people.Now,I want to express my thanks to them.

二、要梳理提示

感恩的对象(写一个还是多个)；感恩的原因；祝福的内容。因为有词数限制,所以要对拓展或发挥的内容进行适当地取舍。

如果感恩的对象只有一人,则在内容上可以适当拓展。如：

I want to thank my father.He is both strict with me and in my schoolwork.He seldom gets angry with me,even though I made a big mistake.I love him so much because he has different ways to deal with problems and people around,and is patient with me when I am in trouble or anger.

如果感恩的对象不止一人，则在内容上少拓展,以免字数过多被扣分。如：

First,I want to thank my parents.They provide a happy life for me.They do much for me and give me so much love.Second,I want to thank my teachers.When I have problems with my study,they are so patient and helpful.Third,I want to thank my classmates.They make me feel more enjoyable and less lonely.

三、要精选词句

写作时避免重复使用同一单词、短语和句型,也要考虑适当使用并列句和复合句。如上面两部分的短语和句型：

短语：get angry with;be strict with;be patient with;in trouble;provide sth.for sb.;do sth.for sb.;have problems with

句型：He seldom gets angry with me,even though I made a...;I love him so much because he has different ways to deal with...,and is patient with me when I am in trouble or anger;They make me feel...and less lonely.

词汇和句型的选择可根据自己的英语功底来决定,发挥的内容也要结合提示信息和自己的实际情况进行适当地补充,绝不能随意编造。

四、要写好尾句

尾句就是文章末尾的点题句。如果是感恩个人的内容,可以写成：

Thank you,Dad!You really help me a lot and I have learned a lot from you.

如果是感恩几个人的内容,可以写成：

Thank you all.I hope you are all in good health and have a good future.

五、要检查核对

答案抄写到答题卡上之前，应仔细确认是否达到了题目要求的词数，标点有无错误等。当将答案抄写到答题卡上时，字迹一定要工整。