How to Keep Healthy

As a saying goes， “Good health is above wealth.” Health is the most important to ones happy life. I think there are many ways to keep healthy.

First， form good habit①. Rise at an early hour， and go to bed early everyday②. Second， physical exercise is necessary for a healthy body. Third， keep a healthy diet， and have more fresh fruit， milk and vegetables. You will be happy and healthy if you follow the above advices③.

江苏省连云港市赣榆区罗阳中学七（3）班 许晴

1. 优点：

短文以一格言开头，说明了健康的重要性，别具一格，然后指出了三条保持健康的建议。最后一句为总结句。文章结构完整，条理清楚，是一篇不错的学生习作。

2. 需要修改的地方：

① habit改为habits。结合下文，此处应该使用复数形式。

② everyday改为every day。everyday是形容词，意为“每日的，每天的”，every day是时间状语，意为“每天”。

③ advices改为advice。advice意为“建议”，是不可数名词。

3. 评分：

按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分25分的评分标准，本文修改前可得23分。