学生风采展示板：广州，我永远的家（上）

学生风采展示板：广州，我永远的家（上）

华南理工大学附属实验学校的初一同学们用文字书写了对广州这座城市的浓浓爱意。在本期和下期里，就让我们跟着他们的文字一起来表达对广州的爱吧！

Last winter holiday， I went to my hometown， and my sister asked me， “What do you think about your city？ Tell me in one word.” I thought for a long time. At last， I said “free.”

Guangzhou is an open and free southern city. 22 years ago， my father went to Guangzhou and wanted to build his new life here. Now he has his own business and a happy family. Everyone in Guangzhou can make their dream come true，if they can work hard and try their best. There are also a lot of foreigners in Guangzhou. They love Guangzhou because Guangzhou is friendly to everyone. You can speak Mandarin，English and Cantonese in Guangzhou.

In Guangzhou， the flower city， you can see flowers everywhere. And Guangzhou is famous for its delicious food. There are more than 100 dim sum you can choose for breakfast. Everyone can fnd their favorite food here. This is Guangzhou， a wonderful， lovely and comfortable city. I love this city.

华南理工大学附属实验学校 初一（2）班曾文鑫

I live in a famous and beautiful city in China. Its name is Guangzhou. I live here every year， every day. It's so beautiful.

It is full of my happy time. There are many department stores and famous buildings here. The department stores are always full of customers.

If you walk along a street， you will see some trees. They are green and you can hear birds singing in the sunshine. Go into a small restaurant， have a cup of cofee and read a book. That's the perfect way to enjoy a quiet afternoon.

The Pearl River is one of the most famous places of interest in Guangzhou. It is Guangzhou's “Mother River.” At night， the tall buildings by the river light up the sky in every direction. The lights of the buildings turn the Pearl River into a colorful sky with thousands of diamonds. You will never forget it if you see it.

Another famous place of interest is the Canton Tower. It lies in the center of Guangzhou. It is one of the tallest buildings in China. Every year， the Canton Tower attracts a large number of tourists to visit Guangzhou.

This is my lovely city， Guangzhou. It is not only my hometown， but also my favorite city. I love it so much. Welcome to Guangzhou and stay here. Hopefully you will love it， too！

华南理工大学附属实验学校 初一（2）班 李文荟

Day by day， the city where we live in is renewing all the time. I love the city I live in. It's not that it is beautiful， but it's the place we belong to. And it should be called—home city.

I live in Guangzhou， China， the place which breeds millions of lives. One of its characters is that it is always full of fragrance and elegance. It is called “the Flower City.” We can see fowers everywhere and use their smiles to decorate the whole city. Every petal of them is so delicate and tender that it makes Guangzhou more charming.

You can see fowers along the road， around the house and all over the park. Not every fower is as beautiful as a rose， or as fragrant as a gardenia［栀子花］. Though not every one of them is perfect， every one of them has its own beauty，just like us. Although we're imperfect［有缺陷的］， we live in one city with happiness， and people among us are nice. This is Guangzhou.

I vow［发誓］to thee［你］， my city—I will always love you！

华南理工大学附属实验学校 初一（1）班 刘派

谢慧欣老师点评：

广州土生土长的13岁少年们，在刚接到“My City”这个作文话题时，种种迷茫和不知所措倾涌而出。对于最熟悉的地方，用第二语言貌似难以言述她那最美好的一面。

在撰写文章前，我要求他们都先听听最近网络特别流行的《南山南》广州粤语版。听完后，他们开始用三天的时间整理自己知识库存中能用到的副词、动词词组、连接词，以及优美的句子。然后，他们开始了创作，撰写自己心目中的广州。

谈到广州，几乎离不开“the Flower City、the Pearl River、Canton Tower、delicious dim sum和Baiyun Hill”等字眼。

但在孩子们的描写中，我们更是看到了广州的两个面：既充满着忙碌的节奏氛围，又萦绕着和平宁静的舒适感。有“逛花街就能好运一整年”的说法，也有包容一切、四季满载花香的感慨。珠江河岸的灯光能把整条珠江都渲染成斑斓的天空，像装点了成千颗钻石般耀眼。而广州塔，在他们眼中更像是一个苗条又迷人的女孩，穿着七彩缤纷的裙子。或许没有恢弘的气势，没有壮丽的景色，但这是他们成长的地方。他们喜爱这个地方，并发誓永远爱着这个地方—广州。