A Letter

童宇轩

Dear Sir or Madam，

Im Li Hua， a Chinese student studying in New Zealand. Im writing to ask for information about New Zealands travel for winter vacation.

I plan to travel in New Zealand. Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？ As I know， New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and many places of interest. I want to know more details about them. In addition I am interested in the local food.

Looking forward to your reply， Thank you very much.

Yours，

Li Hua

杨茜老师点评：

此篇习作是小作者在高一刚学完写信格式之后所写的一篇小短文。本文条理清晰，名词短语运用恰当，对于特殊疑问句的表达符合英语习惯。小作者能综合运用所学句型与词组，如“plan to ”“ be famous for”， “many places of interest”“be interested in ”和 “in addition”等。本文最大的优点是表达清楚，文章中对新西兰进行了简单描写，还适当地点到了自己的一些想法，给文章增添了更多的内容，使其更具有可读性。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am Li Hua， a Chinese student， studying in New Zealand. Im writing to ask for information about your agencys New Zealands travel for the winter vacation.

My friend and I plan to travel in the country. Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？ As we know， New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. Besides， I am also interested in the local food there. How much do I have to pay for the travel？ At length， are there other things I should be aware of？

I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours，

Li Hua