My School Life

▲谢丹娜

Hello！ My name is Sally. Here is a photo of my school life. Look at this photo. Kate is watching TV with his classmates on the computer room. At about ten oclock， Jim is doing his homework in the classroom. Tony is drawing pictures with his friends. Tony is very happy， because he loves drawing pictures. After class， a few students are having a soccer game， but some students are sitting there and watching on the playground. They think the soccer game is wonderful. What is Bill doing？ Oh， he is cleaning the blackboard at the back of the classroom. Is Kangkang cleaning the blackboard too？ No， he isnt. Kangkang is reading English newspapers now. Many students are writing letters.

杨茜老师点评：

此篇习作是小作者在七年级二期刚学完现在进行时用法后所写的一篇小短文。本文条理清晰，现在进行时运用恰当，对于时间的表达符合英语习惯。小作者能综合运用所学句型与词组，如 “look at”“ draw pictures”“have a soccer game”“at the back of the classroom”和 “clean the blackboard”等。本文最大的优点是表达清楚，还适当地运用了特殊疑问句，丰富了文章内容，使其更具有可读性。

不过，小作者对某些介词和代词把握的有待加强。

Hello！ My name is Sally. Here is a photo of my school life. Look at this photo. Kate is watching TV with her classmates in the computer room. At about ten oclock， Jim is doing his homework in the classroom. Tony is drawing pictures with his friends. Tony is very happy， because he loves drawing pictures. After class， a few students are having a soccer game， and some students are sitting there and watching the game. They think the soccer game is wonderful. What is Bill doing？ Oh， he is cleaning the blackboard at the back of the classroom. Is Kangkang cleaning the blackboard too？ No， he isnt. Kangkang is reading English newspapers now. Many students are writing letters. What about you？ Could you tell me something about your school life？endprint