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My Favorite Teacher

2015-05-30张馨媛

初中生学习·低 2015年11期
关键词:字里行间外貌习作

张馨媛

Mrs. Lan is my favorite teacher. She is of medium height. And she is thin. She has long black straight hair. She teaches us Chinese. We are interested in her lessons. Because she is good at different kinds of knowledge. She is strict in our study. But she is friendly to us. We all like her.

【简评】这篇习作以一个学生的眼光观察老师的特点,包含了外貌描写和性格描写两个方面,实践应用了七年级下册第八单元的重点知识点,字里行间表达出对老师的深厚感情。

指导教师:那莎

编辑/丁俊玲

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