My eating habits（2）

李子怡

Hello， Everyone. I am a school girl. My name is Sunny. I am very thin. I want to be strong. So I eat much food every day. I like milk and eggs for breakfast， because they are healthy. I think vegetables are good for my health， so I have vegetables and rice for lunch. As for dinner， tomatoes and potatoes are good food. And I eat them for dinner. Some beef is necessary， so I eat beef sometimes. The fruit is yummy. I have it after dinner every day. These are my eating habits. I think I have good habits， what about yours？

【简评】小作者从自身实际出发，通过分析自己的身体状况，须要多吃健康食物来增加营养，因此从营养早餐、健康午餐、清淡晚餐三方面对何时吃水果、蔬菜、肉以及牛奶等多方面加以分析，养成了均衡的饮食习惯。文章以自我介绍开头引入，最后抛出问题给他人，引发读者的深思，是一篇注重实际、安排合理、表达清晰的优秀范文。

指导教师：周玉芝