I’m growing happily

郑敏

I am growing and Im taller than before. In my life, I hope to grow up happily and healthy. So there are a lot of things that I need to do. First, my life is not always full of sunshine. My parents and teachers always require me to have a good grade. I also hope so. I keep on working hard, I also want to play and relax. Sometimes I argue with my parents and its terrible. Second, when Im in trouble, I should be brave enough to deal with problems. Meeting different problems, Ill regard them as challenges. Ill try to solve them with my heart. After all, Im too young. I have many opportunities to do some things. Its a good chance to do something important. Im growing happily.

简评：本文真实描述了小作者自己现在的生活，句子连贯通顺，句式丰富，言辞诚恳。有效地使用了First, second, sometimes等连接词，井然有序地描述了自己的生活。

作者能够按照题目的要求，生动、详细地刻画自己目前的生活，条理清晰，结构完整，内容充实。同时也提示我们要恰当地处理好与父母之间的摩擦和冲突。

（指导教师：李池红）