英语书面表达30天速成模板
2012-04-29朱彦霖
无论是英语的书面表达,还是语文的作文,考生都希望有快速提高的方法。于是各种各样的作文速成广告铺天盖地。然而,写作和做人一样,是个长期修炼的过程。采用一些蝇营狗苟的技巧,利用几天的工夫,绝不可能立马学会写作文。
考生学习写作一定要首先回到阅读中。好的作品本身就包含着高超的写作技巧,阅读过程就是学习写作技巧的过程。书读得多了,写作技能自然会形成,古人早就总结出来了——“读书破万卷,下笔如有神。”
要读万卷书,才能下笔如有神,这是个漫长的过程,现在离高考只有三四十天了,还来得及吗?不管是否来得及,这是最经济、最有效、最省心的办法,是真正的“捷径”。考生只有在这三四十天保证一定的阅读量,同时学习一些应试小技巧,才能够快速提高书面表达题。之所以很多考生的书面表达题分数总是不高,是因为他们除了英语基础不好,几乎没有课外阅读,甚至有些学生连课本都没有认真读过,试问又怎么能得高分呢。离高考只剩三四十天的时间,考生要读万卷书已经不太可能了,但是不进行课外阅读是万万不能的。
第一,坚持早读、午读、晚读。这些都是发出声音的朗读,考生主要可以读英语课文、优秀的书面表达范文。
第二,坚持每天阅读全英文的课外书籍、杂志、报纸,十几分钟即可。考生也可以考虑阅读英语试卷的阅读理解材料。
第三,树立一个目标,并且达到该目标。比如每两天背诵一篇优秀的范文,考生最好能够选取2011年各地高考优秀的范文为材料。可能有考生觉得背诵不是一个好方法,但是笔者要告诉考生——一切学习都是从模仿开始的。
考生同样可以将这个方法应用到语文的作文写作中,从现在开始每天阅读《读者》《青年文摘》等杂志三十分钟。(其实最好的方法应该是从更早以前,甚至是从小就开始进行阅读小说等)
考生只有坚持阅读、朗读,才能将笔者接下来所要介绍的书面表达题模板理解透彻,最后能熟练应用。
模板一不同观点対比型
此类作文通常有两种题型:
1.要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法,一般可以由四个段落构成:话题的引入,正面观点支持者的看法,反面观点支持者的看法,考生自己的看法;
2.给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点。
【常用句型】
⒈ 开头句
(1)There is a widespread concern over the issue that….
(2)Recently a problem has been brought into focus.
⒉ 过渡句
(1)Opinions vary from individual to individual.
(2)Different people have different points of view.
(3)There are different opinions among peole as to….
(4)The reasons are as follows.
(5)First(ly),…. Second(ly),…. Finally/ Lastly/ Last but not least,….
(6)On the one hand…. But on the other hand….
(7)In the first place,…. In the second place,…. In the third place,….
(8)What is more/ Besides/ In addition….
⒊ 总结句
(1)From my point of view/In my view,I prefer….
(2)In a(one)word/In short/In brief/To conclude/To sum up….
【黄金模板】
1
There is a widespread concern over the issue that话题 / Recently we have had a heated discussion about话题 ,and the results are as follows,/but it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
A majority of students are in favor of观点一 .From their point of view,there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place, 原因一 .Furthermore(Moreover,What''s more,In addition), 原因二 . 原因三may also contribute to it.
However,some other students are against it/take观点二for granted for the following reasons.On one hand, 原因一 .On the other hand, 原因二 .
Having considered both sides of the argument,I have come to the conclusion that考生的观点 /As far as I am concerned/From my perspective/On a personal note,I firmly support the standpoint that考生的观点 /the former(latter)is undoubtedly a wise choice.It is not only because,but also because.Therefore,there is no doubt that.
2
Some people believe that .For example,they think .And it will bring them advantages like .
In my opinion/As far as I am concerned/From my point of view/On a personal note,that cannot be the point/ That''s a little off the point.For one thing, 反对的理由一 .For another thing, 反对的理由二 .
Given the factors I have outlined/Form what I have said,I agree to the thought that作文主题 .
【实战演习1】假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出: 1. 游客多,交通堵塞;2. 郊区环境好。
反对迁出:1. 建于1906年,中外闻名;2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡。
One possible version:
June 3,2012
Dear Editor,
Recently,our class has had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city but it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
A majority of the students in my class are in favor of the move.From their point of view,there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.Furthermore, the fact that once moved,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs may also contribute to it.
However,other students are against the idea.On one hand,they say that the Beijing Zoo,built in 1906, has a history of 100 years,and is well-known at home and abroad.So it should remain where it is.On the other hand,they firmly support the standpoint that moving may cause the death of some animals.To move or not,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
模板二利弊说明型
此类作文通常由三个段落构成:先说明话题现状,再对比事物本身之利弊,最后由考生表明自己的立场态度或者对事物前景提出预测。
【常用句型】
⒈ 开头句
(1)Generally,it is believed that….
(2)It''s becoming more and more common that….
⒉ 过渡句
(1)Just as every coin has two sides,…. have/ has both advantages and disadvantages.
(2)Everything has two sides and…. is not an exception.It has both advantages and disadvantages.
(3)There are some positive aspects as follows.
⒊ 总结句
(1)From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that….
(2)In summary,it is wiser….
【黄金模板】
Nowadays there is a wide concern over话题现状because it plays a significant role/part in our daily life.Of course,there are both advantages and disadvantages in话题 .
It seems to become a current trend that/Generally (speaking)/On the average,its advantages can be seen as follows.As far as those people are concerned,not only利益一 ,but also利益二 .
It goes without saying that/As a popular saying goes,“every coin has two sides”,话题is by no means an exception,which still has negative aspects/the negative aspects are also apparent.To begin with, 弊端一 .In addition/Moreover/To make matters worse,弊端二 .
Having considered both sides of the argument/Through the analysis/comparison,I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.So it''s high time for us human beings/students to take quick action/take it reasonably according to the circumstances we are in.Only in this way can we.
To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of话题into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make better use of the话题 .
【实战演习2】
人们完成工作的方式通常有两种:独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。
1. 独立完成:自行安排、自己解决问题;
2. 合作完成:一起讨论、相互学习;
3. 我喜欢的方式和理由。
注意:词数100~120,文章的题目和开头已给出(不计词数)。
One possible version:
Working Individually or Working in a Team
Nowadays there is a wide concern over the ways to get work done because it plays a significant role/part in our daily life.Considered as working individually and working in a team,they have both advantages and disadvantages when compared to each other.
It seems to become a current trend that more people prefer working individually,whose advantages can be seen as follows.As far as those people are concerned,not only does it strengthen their characters of making a decision decisively,but it also teaches them how to face a problem,which creates the word DIY.
As a popular saying goes,“every coin has two sides”, working individually is by no means an exception,which still has negative aspects.To begin with,those who object to working individually argue that only working in a team can they learn something useful from companions by heated discussions.Moreover,efficient comes from co-operation,along with the right solution.
Having considered both sides of the argument/Through the comparison,I believe it''s high time for us to take working in a team as a wiser choice,as the saying goes,“Unity is Strength”.
模板三解决方法型议论文
此类作文要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径。在提出问题时,根据具体情况用一般现在时或一般过去时;提出解决方案时,通常用一般现在时。
【常用句型】
⒈ 开头句
(1)Recently,we have to face the problem that….
(2)There is no doubt that a growing number of people have paid much attention to….
(3)Today…. which has brought a lot of harm to our daily life.
⒉ 过渡句
(1) As a result/ Therefore,me must take timely action to cope with the situation.
(2) As for the problem,we must take effective measures.
⒊ 总结句
(1)As far as I am concerned,I think it reasonable to….
(2)In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of….
(3)Only in this way can we….
【黄金模板】
Recently,we have to face the problem that 问题现状.It brings great harm to us and society.First,危害一.Second,危害二.
To cope with the situation,me must take timely action. For one thing,解决方法一.For another thing,解决方法二.Finally,解决方法三.
Personally,I believe that it is important to use different solutions according to different situations.Consequently,I''m confident that a brighter future is awaiting us.
【实战演习3】
假设你是高中生李越,有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble)和乱丢垃圾(to litter)的行为,请用英语给校长写一封100~120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容:
1.说明写信目的;
2.对这些行为进行批评;
3.提出建议。
注意:信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出(不计词数)。
June 8,2011
Headmaster,
I''m Li Yue,a student from Class 1,Senior Ⅱ._____________________________________
Li Yue
One possible student version:
June 8,2011
Mr.Headmaster,
I am Li Yue,a student from Class 1,Senior II.I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students:littering and scribbling.It makes our school dirty and unpleasant,and does hard to the image of our school.I always feel ashamed whenever I see this.It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about.I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour.At the same time,students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.I believe that,with the joint efforts of both teachers and students,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
模板四记叙文
记叙文要求按时间顺序交代清楚五个“W”(when, where, who, what, why )和一个“H”(how)。首段介绍时间、地点、人物和事件;中间段描述发生过程;结尾段描写结果及个人观点。通常用一般过去时,但尾句的个人观点应用一般现在时。
【常用句型】
⒈ 开头句;
(1)…is memorable because…had a meaningful experience on that day.
(2)It was a relaxing Sunday.
⒉ 过渡句
(1)First of all,…. Next,…. Then,….Finally,….
(2)Tired as we were,we still felt quite happy.
⒊ 总结句
(1)I''ve learned from the experience that….
(2)This is really an unforgettable experience,one I will cherish forever.
【实战演习4】假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图表述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事,请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,词数不少于60。
内容要点:
1.老师滑倒;
2.学生送老师看病;
3.学生看望老师;
4.老师回班上课。
One possible version:
Last Monday,we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.We were all worried about her.One of the boys carried her on the back,with the help of some others,to the clinic immediately.It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital.The following day,we went to visit her with flower and fruit.Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages,we felt sorry for her and fruit.Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages,we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon.
This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons.We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.
模板五图表说明类
图表作文以说明文和议论文为主,从近几年的情况来看,主要是议论文居多。要求考生从一个表格或者图片出发,简要描述图片的内容,并点明主题,然后联系生活,表达图表带给考生的启示。这种命题方式类似于语文的作文题——给一幅图,让考生从中确定主题,然后再展开论述。考生可以先提出观点,再举例论述。
【常用句型】
⒈ 开头句
(1)As we can see from the picture/chart….(As can be seen from the picture/chart….)
(2)According to the figure/number/statistics/percentage in the chart/bar/line/graph,it can be seen that…. Obviously… but why?
⒉ 过渡句
(1)It is most likely that the drawer of the picture intends not only to tell us the phenomenon/fact,but also to set us thinking more about it….
(2)There are many reasons for…. Firstly….Secondly…. Last but not least….
3.总结句
(1)To solve the problem mentioned above,I suggest that….
(2)So it is high time that we took measures/steps action to put an end to the phenomenon.
【实战演习5】例请根据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
One possible version:
In the picture,there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream.Across the stream,a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole.Not far away there is bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.
The message conveyed in the picture is clear.In pursuing a dream,we might focus on only one way of making it come true,forgetting that there may be alternatives.As indicated in the picture,if the man is willing to look for other possibilities,he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal.All he has to do is to turn around,cross the bridge and walk to the tree.
【实战演习6】假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按照要求完成一篇短文:
1.简要描述下图内容,并点明主题;
2.联系实际,表达该图带给你的启示。
注意:1.词数不少于120个;
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
One possible version:
A drop of water is only a drop of water,but when a great many drops of water join together a river will come into being.And when rivers come together they will form a sea.
As is in the same way,a tree is only a tree,many trees,however,will become a wood.And when several woods lie one by one,they will be called a forest.As is known to everyone,a forest is a home for all kinds of animals and plants.
From the above,we can understand that one person can not do many things.But when many people come together,they can form a society.In a society,people are related to one another,help one another.In this way,we can make a harmonious society in which we can live a happy life.