“将要”放假了

孟天贺

假设你是李艳，请你给英国的朋友Susan写一封信。在信中，你告诉她五一劳动节要到了，你们要放3天的假。你准备和父母一起去海南旅游。你将用新买的照相机拍许多照片。你的英语口语不是很好，你想让她给你提一些提高口语的建议。

要求：1.在信中要体现提示的全部内容。2.正文40词左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Susan,

How is everything going with you?

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I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.

Yours,

Li Yan

解题思路：

首先，要根据提示的内容，组织好写作的顺序。其次，要注意使用正确的时态。在描述将要发生的事情时，应使用一般将来时。最后，要注意把提示的全部内容体现在这封信中。

参考句型及短语：

travel to, take photos, Could you give me some ideas about...

学生习作：

Dear Susan,

How is everything going with you?

May Day is going to come.I am going to have a three-day holiday. I am travelling to Hainan with my parents. I amgoing to take photos with my new camera.Im not good at spoken English. Could you give me some ideas about it?

I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.

Yours,

Li Yan

点评：

本文内容完整，条理清晰，用词比较准确，体现了提示的全部内容，是一篇成功的习作。但有一处错误需要改正：May Day is going to come. 应改为May Day is coming. 在英语中go, come 等词用现在进行时表示将来的动作。参考范文：略