My Favorite Day
2008-05-13李峰
李 峰
学生习作:
Its Friday, November 14th. Im happy today. In1 8 oclock I have Chinese. I like it because its fun. Then I have math and art. In2 this day I can have P.E. in the afternoon. Thats my favorite subject. I play football and basketball. Then I have a two-days3 holiday. At 6 oclock p.m. I can swimming4 for an hour. In5 Friday evening I have a party with my friends.
名师点评:本篇按照时间顺序,从早到晚记录自己最喜欢的一天,条理清晰,语言简洁,值得大家学习。但是仍有几处错误,需要注意。
1. 具体某一时刻前要用介词at, 具体某一天则用介词on。
2. 上面已经提到过,“this day”为具体某一天,其前用介词on。
3. “数量+名词”。要注意名词一定用单数形式。两天的假期,two-day holiday。
4. can为情态动词,其后接动词原形,应改为swim。
5. 某一天的早上、中午、晚上前用介词on, 即On Friday evening。
范文:
My Favorite Day
Its Friday, November 14th. Im happy today. At 8 oclock I have Chinese. I like it because its fun. Then I have math and art. On this day, I can have P.E. in the afternoon. Thats my favorite subject. I play football and basketball. Then I have a two-day holiday. At 6 oclock p.m. I can swim for an hour. On Friday evening I have a party with my friends.