What I Want to Be in the Future

If God gives me a chance to choose my dream job， I want to be an English teacher teaching pupils. Here are two reasons.

For one thing，it will not only make me open-minded but also enable me to help pupils obtain knowledge.For another， I can make a difference to the development of the pupils by inspiring them to become better. I still remember failing an English exam once and feeling upset， my English teacher cheered me up and shared effective ways to improve my English. From then on， I made up my mind to be an English teacher.

In order to realize my dream， I'll spare no effort to study，read more English books and watch English movies so as to get more knowledge.I am firmly convinced that I will become an outstanding English teacher in the future.

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指导老师 卢婷

本文思路清晰，行文流畅。在表达方面，能熟练运用open-minded，obtain，inspire，outstanding等高级词汇，且能准确使用条件句、并列句、宾语从句、倒装句等；在逻辑上，能正确使用Here are…承上启下，使用For one thing，For another来梳理脉络，显示出扎实的英文写作功底。