The Biggest Change I’ve Made

The time went by fairly fast. I have definitely changed a lot in the past three years. I used to be short， but now I am taller. The biggest change， though， is that I enjoy reading more than I used to.

During my first vacation in junior high school， my teacher asked us to read more classics， so I read a variety of books like The Little Prince and Harry Potter， which taught me to be brave in the face of difficulties and never give up. After that， no matter how busy I was， I would read for an hour every day.

All in all， falling in love with reading is my biggest change， which makes me a braver and better person. And I will certainly learn to accept new changes.

河南省郑州金桂中学

指导老师 辛会勤

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作者讲述了自己初中三年最大的变化，就是更爱阅读了。语言使用恰当，比如第一段“though”作为插入语，体现出具体的转折，是常用的英文表达习惯。第二段叙事中，“during”“after that”等过渡性词语的使用，极大润色了叙事过程。