Great Changes

How time flies！ Two years have passed. I have undergone tremendous changes.

First， I have become a good helper. In the past， I was extremely shy. Thanks to my best friend who encouraged me to make friends and helped me with my study，I learned how to help others actively. Second， I have become a good learner. I didn’t develop good learning habits before. Luckily， my teacher gave me some useful advice.With my teacher’s help，I have mastered many learning skills. Third， I have become a wiser man. The more knowledge I obtain，the more ways I can figure out to solve problems.

Looking back at the past two years， I have become a good helper， a good learner and a wiser man. I will move on to be a better man in the future.

河南省郑州市第四十九中学

指导老师 乔明言

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作者描述了自己初中阶段的成长，就自己的三个改变分别展开叙述，有对比，有举例。词汇运用准确，灵活运用多个短语、句型，将自己的成长变化用helper、learner和wiser man来总结，显示出不俗的思辨能力。